| Reviews for Schatten und Lichter |
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Kristi chapter 41 . 8/30/2004 Great fic, I'm only sad it's over. The transitions were sometimes confusing.. alot of times confusing. But that may be because I'm often confused. Anyway, it's great. I will read it again some time soon. |
KittyKristi chapter 23 . 7/26/2004 Ah, this was a wonderful chapter however.. when "Sore" came up, at first I read it as the american word rather then the japanese. ~_o; |
KittyKristi chapter 22 . 7/26/2004 This chapter brought tears to my eyes. Don't get me wrong, not at all was it bad, just very very good.. So intense too.. Funny. 22 has always been my lucky number. |
KittyKristi chapter 15 . 7/26/2004 _ Wow, this is getting so good. My reviews shall melt into a puddle of mixed compliments like so.. |
KittyKristi chapter 6 . 7/26/2004 -stretches- Well if I reviewed for every chapter, that'd just be hassle for both of us.. me writing.. you reading.. Well anyway, this is a great chapter. I'm so into your writing! It seems like you can handle alot of different themes. It's an excellent style. |
KittyKristi chapter 3 . 7/26/2004 o_o I love you so VERY much! |
KittyKristi chapter 2 . 7/26/2004 That chapter ran about ten times better then an actual episode of Weiß, and these lines: "Nagi stood next to him, bored. Bored and boring. Nagi never did anything interesting, said anything interesting, and even his thoughts had become uninteresting. Schuldich suspected sometimes that he purposely was that way to bore him. " "Project, Nagi thought, bemused for the first time that meeting, What an apt word. " -were genius. I've got an rp friend who's completely obsessed with Nagi, and even though I've always respected him as a perfect RPer of the character, I've never seen anything quite so good. The story's looking good, and thanks again for posting. |
KittyKristi chapter 1 . 7/26/2004 This looks promising, honestly when I clicked it I didn't expect it to be this well-written at all. Just because good Weiß fics are so rare. Well it is, very well written. Quite a pleasurable read, I love your transitions and you also keep character so well! You seem to have a focus on each character rather then one specifically, which is also rare. o_o I definately can't do it. It reads like a good novel, so yea, Basically I'm very impressed. Thank's alot for sharing, and I hope as I continue through chapters I'll find you've kept up the good work. |
Foolscapping chapter 11 . 10/29/2003 I read the whole story, and it rocked! I didn't like the way it completely changed everything, and didn't go on after the main story, though. But you did alot better than me! Continue this story, please? PLEASE? Aya says please too! (; |
Nekocin chapter 10 . 8/10/2003 Very catchy story. Nice intro and I just happened to noticed you used different lyric's translation. I've just found a few minor errors like the misspelling of "katana" and some sentences that needed some more confirmation. Some of the errors tend to be a bit unnoticeable. But if you ask for a beta-reader, she/he might help you point out some errors -. Anyways... this actually sounds a bit like you're rewriting the series x_x I'll admit I've never seen it but just saw a few intro episodes -_-' The way you described the whole story really looks as if it's a movie. I'll try to read the other rest. But for now... 10 chapters seem enough _. By the way Schreient's member's name is Schoen _. Kind of a bit confused at the end of the 10th chapter. But anyways. Nice work! I'll come back later to review the 11-20 chapters _! |
Daemonchan chapter 41 . 10/17/2002 Oh. *sniffle* That was simply fabulous. I like that ending MUCH better than the anime. I'm sorry to see this end...though I thought I glimpsed the first chapter of a sequel on my way through! Owari indeed! |
Daemonchan chapter 39 . 10/17/2002 Gah! What a dream! Do we get to know who the man was that told Sakura-chan? Ne... |
Daemonchan chapter 38 . 10/17/2002 I'm catching up, Riva-chan! *snort* Hell from the toilet on. Good one. _ |
xellos chapter 41 . 10/8/2002 This is without a doubt one of the finest, if not the finest, stories in the Weiss Kreuz section. Congratulations and please, keep writing. |
Carter Tachikawa chapter 41 . 10/8/2002 Wonderful story. I am amazed that it is finally finished. You ended it well though. I'm also amazed that you didn't get as many reviews as you deserve. I loved every moment of it. You tied everything up nicely and their lives were so believable. I'm sad you won't have anymore of this story but it's going on my faves and I intend to read it over again. Pat yourself on the back, you've done well.~CT |