Beautiful ending! I'm squealing with glee

Evil cliffhanger! I love your writing and the relationship that Prime and Prowl have. Can't wait for the final part!

OKay...I got confused at first a the part of "Twin black hands dig under my mag plates in response" cause Prowl's hands are not black but white and I was beginning to think it was Jazz cause his hands are black. So might might want to change that.

*ecstatic fangirl squeal*

Yay, new chapter!

The change of perspective was great, it serves to keep the reader wriggling in his or her seat with excitement and the cliffhanger is absolutely evil (which of course is the best kind there is!).

Absolutely loved this and am on the lookout for more!

Definetely worth the wait!

You just made my day with the new chapter.

The descripitions are perfect, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

At least they aren't both in denial anymore.

More please :)

I squee'd when I saw as update :D I just love this story!

Wow, dark chapter. . It's always interesting to see the world through Prowl's eyes. He is interpreted in so many different ways by several authors and it's such a treat to have him appear ''human''. I liked how he thinks himself flawed, and how he admits to having fear. I can truly believe in that.

And the backstory-thinghy with Optimus? Loved it. Really sad and pretty at the same time.

Great work!

Take Care :)

This particular pairing is not one of my most favorites, but the way you write them is wonderful. Good character development on both ends. Cannot wait to see what happens next and am eagerly awaiting your next update. :)

I was overjoyed when I realized this fic had been updated! I read it awhile back, but thought it dead because it hadn't been updated in awhile. I loved it then and love it even more so now.

Really though, what a horrible place to leave off. *cries* Poor Prowl! I can't wait to see what happens. And I especially can't wait till he's rescued- that way Prime can, uh, SHOW him how much he was missed.

This story. This story! I can't even. It's amazing! I'm absolutely in love with your writing! As you can tell by my exclamation points! Seriously, though, this is just dshdfaskjlfhsakl. I can't wait to see what's coming next! You've got me looking forward to the next chapter, author!

*whooping with joy*

a new chapter! You just made my day.

It was wonderfully done! Bad Jazz, running interference like that. I wonder how long it will take for Prowl to see the light...

Already looking forward to more (Prime to the rescue?)!

At first I wasn't sure what to think of this fic. It seemed like maybe the attraction was one-sided and Prowl's actions were purely out of duty. The angst-lover in me still thinks that might be so; the romantic in me just wants to see Prowl and Optimus live Happily Ever After, with Brother Jazz (and brother-in-law Sideswipe...) looking on fondly.

I don't know where this is going, and I *love* that I don't know :D

For now I'll look forward to Prowl being rescued, and then the continuation of my confusion until a resolution is struck :)

Wow, simply an amazing chapter! The smex was very smexy, and the introspective scene afterwards had me on the edge of my seat. Prime is realizing that his feelings for Prowl go beyond . . . Err, casual interfacing and friendship _; Jazz's part was really interesting, too. I'd love to see him confront Prime and Prowl in a later chapter.

... Oh, and btw, that was a cruel cliffhanger to leave us at :P

More, please! *dangles puppy-opticed Bluestreak in front of author*

Once again, great stuff. Where on Cybertron do you pull your ideas from? I don't see them anywhere else. Like JazzXSideswipe. Haven't seen that one before... Where I was looking, at least. Anyways, this is really well done. I like your style. The interfacing is very different from most stuff you can find: sexy and yet not in your face or PWP. Nice balance you've achieved there. As with your other stories, I can't wait to read more. _

Omigaawd I love this! You're writing-style is absolutely amazing, the plot (yes, I sense it behind the glorious smut ;P ..) - is well-though out, and the pairings: yum!

Can't wait for more :D