This is gorgeous.

Very nice, very...interesting. Keep writing

And again wow.

Wonderful job.

I love #19! You do a good job of showing how House rivalries change and define friendships at Hogwarts. The memory box was a good one, too - I think the Ravenclaw and Gryffindor patches are a wonderful way of symbolizing Padma and Parvati's relationship.

This was as excellent as your other one. I love your writing already. x

The simple, heartbreaking ending adds so much to the complexity of the character you've given her. Though this isn't how I write her, it was interesting and different and I enjoyed it immensly. Thank you :)

this is a great piece of writing. i really enjoyed it, great job

Great story; I liked 18 and the end of 12 the best.