I love the Severus you created . His character growth was amazing .

intense story, I feel it answer so many question about Snape' feel bout Dumbledore (if he was surviving war). And beautiful love story with hermione. I dont feel he's OOC, I feel that what he will do if he survive, find true love and live happily ever after

Oh, lovely! Was also watching a tango video,and, somehow this dovetailed in!

Funny that Severus keeps referring to Lily as a woman or seemingly more mature, but he considers Hermoine a young woman therefore less mature when in actuality, Lily was just about the same age Hermoine is now when she was murdered. Not to mention, Lily and his friendship ended when they were teenagers.

For her part, Hermione is attributing qualities to her ex that he clearly did not have.

This story was cute and I did enjoy the fact that they actually tried working through their problems instead of constantly fighting. That being said, I do think it went a bit long and was a bit boring at parts. You said too at one point such a fluffy story had no need to just go on and on. Thank you for your story.

this is fabulous but, I super hate thepage break. if your listening to it, it's sooooo irritating lol

I absolutely loved this journey ! Thank you !

Well,your first hg/ss fic you say? Very good beginning and I am looking forward to more!

Awww, I'm so glad they got through that hurdle...well at least for the time being. I like that they both acknowledged that yes, they will eventually talk about the war but no, now was not the right time.

I just adored this whole chapter! And that scene? Sooooo hot! but incredibly sweet too, hehe!

A very intriguing first chapter! The hurdle of Hermione already having a muggle boyfriend definitely makes things interesting, as do some of the stipulations in the law like muggleborns not being able to marry other muggleborns and only the ministry approved matches get free Hogwarts tuition, therefore actually encouraging people to be matched. Sounds very suspicious and makes me wonder if there is a someone or multiple someone's behind it and they have reasons that arnt just because of the population decline. Of course I could just be over thinking it, lol. Looking forward to seeing where things go.

Ha, I knew the names Aliena and Caris but I couldn't recall where from. I read both books by Follett, they were great!

I enjoyed thisthanks for writing!

Lovely story! Thank you for the nice reading piece!

Yeah. Always be nice to your beta. Betareaders are very important.
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