Maravilloso!
De Verdad Perfecto!
Espero Puedas Continuarlo Pronto

Exquisito!
Me Fascinó,

Encantador!
De Verdad Perfecto

Fantástico,
Perfecto.

Un Maravilloso Comienzo!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto!

Truly a great story hope to see more chapters in the future.

The summary is misleading, fem-Harry means that Harry changes to a female completely, not some half-ass way were he still keeps his dick, change fem to futanari or GP because it's gonna piss people off, it sure as hell pissed me off. You have a cool story and plot, but it's the little things that ruin perfectly good stories.

...are you fucking kidding me? I know Harry is turning into a girl, but are you seriously making him a spineless cowered too? Is he going to seriously just accept Dumbledore meddling with his life and fucking guilt-tripping to go back to his abusers in order to fucking save them? Just because Harry is getting a gender change doesn't mean he also has to act like a fucking submissive chick. Mate, I like your story but please for the love of every independent woman out there have Harry grow a pair or in his case I guess breasts.

Oh. So it's futanari.

I'm loving this so far! You might want to put a note in your description about the femslash angle, but the people crying about it are silly. Your writing is solid, and that's the most important part.

Hi,
gave chapter one a try but had to abort reading this story. It's simply not my kind of plot where every adult tries to make a teenager into a good little soldier and harry takes it without really questioning anything. I call something like that child abuse and misuse of power from the teachers/aurors.

But hey, this story is very well written and has a good format ;)

ArcTile

is harry a girl here or does he have curly hair when it gets longer.. probably not going to answer but on to the next chapter

It was nicely written but at the same time, fem Harry is not my cup of tea. At a time, I feared that is what would happen, and you said that " the first chapters will be the extend of Harry's feminine aspects and you have no intentions at all of transforrming him into a girl ". It is obvious now that you have decided to do a bit of a 180 on that point. While some will prefer Harry being a girl now, I'm more into characters that retain their canon aspect, as in a girl stay a girl and a guy a guy.

It kinda makes me regret the previous story with the werewolf that I really enjoyed, so I guess I will have to move on from what has been something great. You still write very nicely but I just can't get into this new direction that I feared would happen ( and it seems I was right ).

Overall, it was nice and I'm sure you have a good future in front of you.

I came expecting fem slash, not chick with dick. Seriously Futa warning on summary.

So this is futa? A warning in summary would have been nice. What a waste of time, wouldn't have bothered starting it if i knew it would be futa.