Reviews for Clouds
Deltajoshua12 chapter 8 . 5/13
Please return and continue writing fanfics and finish this story this is just too good.
constitutionals chapter 1 . 4/12
I'm sorry but you have to finish. we can't just leave rei and shinji stranded. We have to pilot the eva please
Dragonjek chapter 8 . 8/18/2017
Wow. That went way beyond anything Shinji could have expected. That deserves being slapped in the face, not... this.

And that's not even beginning to get into it from Rei's POV, which I don't think I can even adequately do. On one hand, it feels silly to commit suicide over high school rejection (especially sine he at least reaffirmed their friendship). But... if one has felt only numbness throughout their entire life, do not the slightest pricks of warmth and coolness become searing flames and freezing ice? If you have lived only in darkness, isn't the light of a candle as though a sunrise? And with her existing replacability and identity issues...

But damn. What the HELL has Gendo been doing to her? Any sort of withdrawal symptoms for any sort of drug are nasty, but how she starts feeling about herself when she starts coming off the drug is... evocative of something other than med-induced emotional instability, and much worse.
onepeicefan chapter 8 . 3/27/2015
PLZ UPDATE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENES NEXT PLZ UPDATE
AKissAndAGunshot chapter 8 . 4/23/2011
PICK UP YOUR FREAKIN' PENCIL AND FINISH THIS! YOU ARE KILLING ME!
Nohbdy chapter 8 . 8/6/2010
Oh, come on! Don't tell me you're letting this fic die/go dormant at this point. Please continue the story.
Nobhdy chapter 8 . 7/14/2010
The suspense is killing me. Please tell me this isn't a dead fic.
Mazda Tha Crazy chapter 6 . 3/31/2010
I wouldn't mind being a pre reader
Kendrix chapter 8 . 3/9/2010
gendo's not going to be pleased... Something tells me that the next Chapter's going to have a lot of drama *.*

Still, poor Shinji...
Greenfang chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
Firstly, yay for the update, nicely writing, creating tension and, I must admit, worry on the part of your readers.

Secondly, bah for not letting us know if Rei is ok or not! :)

Well done, just please don't take too long to update and put us all out of our misery vis a vis how Miss Ayanami is faring!

Ja,

Greenfang.
Squire of Gothos chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
I liked the dialog in the first section, that kind of free talking is what I always try to aspire to, but usually fail at. On a side note, as another fellow member of Fanf1cFan's harem, I welcome you _
mangafreak7793 chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
short chapter still good thought keep up the good work, update soon, why do I feel that those cheerful days of Shinji and the gang are so far away and unattainable now
James Rei's Gaurdian chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
Rar! Cliffhanger bad. Update soon.
patleon909 chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
Okay, NOW you're starting to make me worried. I'm praying with all my might that Rei is just unconscious from the pills or is at worst in a semi-comatose state, because if you actually killed her, that is not only going to be insanely cruel, but that's also going to break our spineless little lover-boy's heart and mind. He's going to have a mental breakdown, blame himself for Rei's death, then commit suicide himself out of guilt. Or if they don't tell him and just replace her with a Rei clone, he's going to pick up on it soon, get depressed, and... well, I don't know from there.

Damn it, this is a great fanfic, I just hate that apparently you can't update more than once a month... this is really good stuff, great job w
Specter Von Baren chapter 7 . 1/23/2010
*sigh* So sad... To have nothing and feel like nothing...

signed

Specter
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