You know you need to update you should be ashamed we've been waiting for years so update your fans

Boy I really wish you would finish this I've just found this but It's so good n is in much pain for the two ren/kyoko but I also feel bad for sho because if they Ho ahead it'll only bring to the both of them she'll be continuously thinking of ren n sho will live in the shadow of someone he can never catch up to because her heart already belongs to ren n not sho n ren wont move any further he remain stuck because his hear is hers n hers alone he' . way after be talked to by kuu so the anger is not as heightened but the pain is another matter so if your still looking at n reading your reviews please come back n conclude your story would truly love to finishthis n great job by the way

noo! poor ren! please somebody help kyoko! not sho!

that makes sense..

i'm sorry. thought that i want to kill you cos you make my favorite couple suffering (kyoko and ren of course). but is this story about yaoi?

Your story isn't crap (replying to your author notes at the bottom). I think that this would have been a good direction to take the story, if the true writer hadn't wanted to take us in a different direction... and make us wait... and wait... and (okay, I'll stop now).

Looking forward to reading more.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Kuon what're you doing?

You must steal her away!

:) put another chapter up! it was getting really good! XD

cant wait to read the next part!

won't you continue?

I liked that it was Kuu who found her. It would be cliche if she ran to the forest and Ren found her there.

~Ashlyn

Poor Kuon...Ren...but isn't 'brake' suppose to be 'break' or something?

Love it!

Aw man. This is so sad. :(

I can't wait to read more though.

Your portrayal of SHo seems accurate...I can imagine him wanting to take liberties with her but restraining himself, for a while before he claims her.

Yay! Excellente! 8/10 stars! Nice but can you pull in Kanae Kotonami and Maria please. Oh yeah! It seems as though you keep putting "quiet" down instead of the word "QUITE". It is slightly annoying. but nice job but keep improving and try to make the chapters maybe a paragraph or two longer on the average chapter so far.

Very good so far (chap 2) but please use beta or spell check or somethin cause it is a little bit challenging to put some of the words and extra letters together. But that was beasty(awsome) !