Plz update I like where your going with the story but I'm sorry to say that I'm a Zoey Stark fan and it sucks that you unpaired them makes me feel like they broke up or something or in the way you put it never met.

But nonetheless I like the story its just weird that you made a character just as powerful as Zoey.

i love it plz write more! oh and if you like HoN you might like the Love at Stakes series! and im also in band!

This story is so tres cool btw. I mean time-stopping, how groovylicious is that! i really like this athena character. It is actually creepy the way that zoey and athena's lives are like the same, but also different at the same time. Again, tres cool.

I found this story after reading Discovered...this explains a lot. This is great! So, she can stop time, and is exactly like Zoey? And both of them are in love with Stark?

What did this story used to be called? I know its a bit random but I want to know.

Anyway, this is a great story! Please write more and update soon, I want to read more about Athena!

Percy Jackson! I love that series.

Thanks for writing such a great story!

I so love this story. It's so awesome. I love that Stark's character is so different. I WANT MORE!

Ya! Go Team Jacob! It's kind of Go Figure for me too 'cuz everone says I'm SO vampyre! Awesome! And I know what she means by 'She sounds just like Zoey.'

Update ASAP!

i like it Stark is such a flirt so i wasn't surprise but her not being able to up her eyes were weird i think you end up putting her on neferet side, a red fledging, that would be interesting

wHAT is there to critisize? it is AWESOME! u NEED to spill the beans, and SOON! update ASAP!

this is a great story!

please update soon.

can't wait for the next chapter i hope it's as good as the beginning of the story.

:)