| Reviews for A Family? |
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   JoanIncarnate chapter 3 . 11/6/2011 i DID read "once upon a marigold"! it was so cute! and funny. |
| Shh - my pen name is pen name chapter 3 . 8/9/2010 Thats a great story PLEASE CONTINUE! yeah, I have read once upon a marigold... thats a good book! |
| Mew Mew White Dragon chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Well I'm not real sure the kid would warm up to Hiro that quickly and then just accept going to live with this doctor and his lover so readily. But beyond that first why is Nowaki treating this child's mother? She's an adult. He doesn't treat adults he specializes in pediatrics. So unless this girl unable to see her mother for whatever the reason or her mother was sleeping and she was bored came wandering into the children ward sad and lonely or the halls Nowaki wouldn't have ever met her. Second if she has no other family and her mother was hospitalized the hospital would have probably called social services to come get her and she'd have been put in an orphanage or foster home as the kid can't stay in the hospital. I also have a problem with a 6 year old knowing what yaoi means and accepting it. I haven't been around any 6 year olds but I find it hard to believe they know what it is and what it means. Plus the mother saying yes it is yaoi. Knowing her male doctor who offered to take your kid in has a male lover and she's happy about this and willing to just hand her child over seems a bit far fetched. Knowing the hardships her child will have to face, like discrimination and things. The best example I've found of this is a wonderful set of stories by a very good author. Though you must me a Gravitation fan. and search for summery and look up AJA's Gravitation ABC series. In 5 she talks about the adoption process in Japan and in 6 more problems and going to court. |
| jay-lei chapter 3 . 1/16/2010 urgh! I loev this story so... When are you going to update again? i need to know! please? updates? :D |
| TinyAmbassadorFrisk chapter 1 . 11/13/2009 I loved it. i can't wait for you to update |
| Sumcrazychich chapter 3 . 7/4/2009 More? Please? |
| Halan Lore chapter 3 . 5/16/2009 Miyagi! Haha ~Agatsuma Ritsuka~ |
| Somecrazychick chapter 3 . 5/14/2009 WOOT! PARTY! I can't wait to read the next one! _~ |
| Hiroki. no. fan chapter 3 . 5/13/2009 OMG!, Hiroki as a proud father is so sexy! i love this fic. if you dont continue it soon, i will die, im serious. Please continue writing as good as you do it now. Bye! |
| Annabel N chapter 3 . 5/13/2009 A haha... I can totally imagine Hiroki cursing at the candles. XD |
| xXZeroChanXx chapter 2 . 5/11/2009 aww [ so sad! But great! D I laughed at the end with the spoon xD |
| Annabel N chapter 2 . 5/8/2009 This is such a heart-warming story... I am very excited to meet Tohya-san. She almost sounds like a female Hiroki! |
| Purishirakun chapter 2 . 5/6/2009 aw D: such a sad chappy! |
| Csi-NYFan4EVA chapter 2 . 5/6/2009 Toyha sounds exactly like me dosnt she megan |
| Somecrazychick chapter 2 . 5/5/2009 More! More! I must read more...this accually made me cry! Your an awsome writer! _~ |
