Wow, nice insight into Edmund's head - he deserved more screen time in the movie and it was a very lifelike reaction to Peter's change: I always wondered how hard it must have been to lose his brother like that when they were so close (even if it was only temporary) and you portrayed some really interesting thoughts. Good job :)

Great story! I love this from Ed's POV about how Peter was at the beginning of Caspian movie. Wonderful!

Awsome story!

FF Out.

omg,you left me with tears in my eyes. I liked it was Ed'POV and perfectly in character! I simply adore him and all tha angst thoughts about how he truly misses peter and the time he had it sorted. Really, really beautiful work. I'm goingi to read the sequel now!

Very well written. I'm honored that you would take my piece and do something like this with it. I really enjoyed seeing Ed's thoughts painted out in more detail, and it was fun to see parts of what I did hidden within your work. (Kind of like an Easter egg hunt! Lol.)

I look forward to seeing more of your stories. :)

That was heartbreaking. Heartbreaking...and so well written. This was amazing, sad and angsty and messy though it was. I really liked it-and couldn't stop reading it until I had reached the end.

I do have a small request, though ::sheepish smile:: Would you mind terribly writing a fic where Peter finds out about Ed's injuries he received from those fights, what he's thinking here? I'd love it, if you could. It's only a request, of course, but...::smiles sheepishly again::

Thank you for such a wonderful bit of fiction-it's gone right onto my favorites list!

Best Regards,

Sentimental Star