Hey there!
Im just a random teen who happened to read your amazing work "maria". I saw that you mentioned this story at the end of maria. I was so excited to reas this, but now i have read it all, and just wondered why you stopped posting-youre an amazing author. Please please pretty please continue on with your great work?

WHAT!? IT JUST ENDED?

Please update quickly I really want to see where this is going. You've got me hooked!

NEXT CHAPTER. NOW. NOOOW.

Ok so I thought it was pretty good, but Edward's character doesn't really feel enough like Edward in the Twilight books. Yes I realize that this is supposed to be kind of a parody but it just feels like he lost some of his charm in this story.

NOT ENOUGH FLUFF!

Anyone who's lost both parents in such a tragic manner and then landed in The System are bound to have some scars...either visual or emotional or both!
I'm so sad I'll never find out the whole story *sigh!* After all this time, you probably look back on it and think you could do so much better now and you SO COULD! It's got good, solid bones! Just sayin'!

Renee Dwyer must be Bella's mom but what she has to do with Edward's mom is the question. I'm so glad Edward had a great day throwin' pies with his friends before the doom and gloom arrived with that package.

Hah! You haven't lived until you've had fries with hot, spicy peanutbutter sauce! (It's a Dutch thing!}
I love your Alice and how she just seems to "know" things LOL!

And of course his checkered past involved a giiirl! Which leaves us with way more questions LOL!
Actually, havin' Bella along WILL influence Charlie's permission...smart move!

With any luck, Edward's boredome is about to come to a screechin' halt LOL! Although, if he's gonna involve Bella in whatever Alice has planned, I'm hopin' Charlie will take pity and LET HIM!

Looks like they both survived first day of school but I have to wonder what Lauren did to Bella in the past that has her so scared now!

Of course Edward would get the job from hell LOL! Only good side is makin' friends with Alice.
That nightmare probably has a base in reality, which sounds about as bad as it can get...poor kid.
Let's see how his first day of school goes.

I don't know what all Edward did to land himself in Purgatory...not quite Hell, but I'm hopin' time will be kind to him. Oh, and Bella, too!

Well, fuck! I already knew this was gonna hurt but went and did it anyway. Ain't no way I'm not gonna read everything you've written on this story and I'm not blind...I see you haven't updated in forever and probably won't. What the fuck ever...on to chapter 2!