are gonna continue? :(

Please for the sake of all that is good in this world, UPDATE!

I think it's pretty good, but you should continue it instead of leaving it a oneshot.

I liked most of it, although I felt the end was a bit fragmented, and didn't seem to fit with the rest of the tone. It might have been an interesting fic if continued, as it is the end doesn't seem to suit a one-shot. otherwise though i loved what you did with the "sun". Well done

So sweet.

Tell her, Tugger!

What a great if not awesome place to leave that ending. It gets people contemplating on whether he would decide to tell her or not. :)

The overall story was cute and enjoyable. You should really consider giving yourself a chance. You’re too negative about some of your pieces; only some. You’re pretty judgmental, but I’ll tell you, I love everything you write.

-jelliclesoul635

Talk about two pig-headed cats! lol I love the way you write their characters, though. Good job. :-)

Aw... this is so sweet.

I love it, really I do.

Those two are made for each other- you really captured that.

Well I was pretty impressed ]

Great job as always.

I really like it! I wish that he had been able to say it but I think it leads up to the ending well. Great story for being so busy! I feel your pain!

-Nina

TELL HER YOU IDIOT!

Aw! This was so amazingly amazing , Damn It Tugger , just tell her , LOVE IT!

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Really cute, although the ending seemed a little abrupt and incomplete. Only a little. Nice job with the sun thing. It's so sweet that he compared her to the sun. Although there could be a little more chemistry between them, that tiny part before the stars(*) at the end felt a little dry. Great job on the whole though. There aren't really many Bomba/Tugger fics out here though, they're my favourite couple. Or maybe it's just me...ah well. DIE HARD BOMBA/TUGGER FAN HERE!XD Keep writing!~

Awe! poor tugger and Bomba.

How can you not be impressed with this? it's brilliant!

I love the fact that Jemima knows he loves Bomba but not Bomba herself.

Can't wait for your next story!

DNDK 38

OH! I love that. It's beautiful, Tugger and Bomba are so cute together, I can see why William Shakespeare was up on the top of the page. :) You did a fantastic job, and your descriptions and dialogue were phenomenal. You did a wonderful job, quit hitting yourself because of it! This is a very good fanfic, and I absolutely love it!