Nice piece inside Parker’s head. You’re right, they don’t give her enough credit. Great work.

I enjoyed your story :-)

I like how nicely you wrote Parker's thought process. Good work :)

very cute i love it

Aw! This fic is adorable! I love how you wrote them. And I love how I can read it as P/E or just as a brother-sister relationship since I like both versions.

Parker's observations of Eliot made me feel all mushy and gooey inside. Would you ever consider a sequel? I'd love to see how this thing between them develops from here. Those two are so good for each other. Even if I do like P/H, too.

Really liked this.

Liked this. You really did a great job on Eliot and Parker's brother/sister relationship :)

Since I wouldn't have the first clue how to get inside Parker's head and write something like this, I have to say you I find you very talented for doing so!

Its sweet that she wants to fix Eliot, and hopes that maybe doing so will allow him to fix her too. All her thoughts of the gang seemed very plausible and accurate.

Loved the ending - too cute. Thanx for a fun read :)

~Ultra~

that was great loved it

I am a big Parker and Eliot fan. I thought you captured both characters very well. Parker tentatively showing affection was very sweet. Very cute story.

This was a wonderful introspective piece that really let Parker's thought process shine through. She may not be like other people, but that doesn't mean she doesn't crave the same things, the same sense of belonging.

Thanks for sharing!

this was one awesome one shot. i loved it!

I love this story more than I can describe.

That was adorable. I like the observation that eliot likes to touch, likes human contact, even though it's not easy. And the way Nate and Eliot reacted to her wanting to be a part of the team was too cute. And the end, that they were both trying to help eachother, that was really nice. Nice work.

pj

beautiful. simply beautiful