Cool! Interesting pattern. Moorrreee!

I have to be honest, when I read the summary; I assumed this was a story about Rita. Although, now that I've read this and carefully thought about it, I have no idea why I thought that.

Anyway, I've never, not even for a second, considered Dexter and Jeremy as a pairing. However, that's not to say I didn't like what I just read. I think Jeremy has a vulnerably about him, an innocence even, that's visible to someone like Dexter. Others may write him off as just another delinquent, but Dexter understands, really understands what it’s like to find yourself wanting to feel what others feel in order to fit in. That's why I feel that the pairing isn't all that farfetched.

I probably might have been averse to the pairing had this not been so well written. There are some very nice touches to this and you're able to show Jeremy's conflicting emotions very well. One thing I would say you need to work on is the length of the chapters, but really, that's up to you. Please update when you can, I would love to see more.

Wow, what a wonderful story please update some more!

This was just perfect to start my day. Thanks so much for sharing it and I hope you keep writing.

Ohh! Keep writing please! I actually prefer the short and to the point chapters. Different point of views and background details are nice, but a lot of people go overboard and I think you're doing just fine. :)

I like it, i like the pairing and the story. But i can't believe he messed up Dexter's blood slides...damn not smart. And yet he's still there...you gotta update.

I love this pairing and it's possibilities. Nicely written fic. Is there going to be a 3rd chapter?

Good POV but too short. It does sum up Jeremy's POV very well though. Write more!

Good start! I'll be looking for the next chapter.