Beautifully written!

Dialogue was AMAZING. Curley is unfortunately spelled with an 'e' to make it annoying (I'm sorry, I'm picky about spelling and grammar). But I LOVED this, nice to hear from someone out of school who seems to love OMAM like I do. Metaphorical hat is completely off to you.

I think that was kind of fitting in a way. As much as I would love it if the story had a happy ending, perhaps it was never meant to be happy.

brilliant. a much clearer ending than the book itself had, with more closure as to George's fate and some really tense moments. a really good and serious ending. well done!

Excellent. The emotion behind your work was obviously well thought out.

Have a nice day,

Tallz~

I really liked this! I also had to read the book last year in school and I think it was really fitting for George to take his life after Lennie's since you could never find one without the other. Also I liked that Slim still cared about their bodies after they were gone, because that really seems like his character.

Amazing! )

Wow... to be honest, I liked this better than the actual ending ) Great job at portraying the characters!

Oh my God, this is awesome. ]

You captured the characters perfectly!

The ending was even sadder than the book, but it makes more sense to me thana George would die with Lennie. One without the other is just... well' it ain't right.

oh my gosh. This is amazing. Seriously amazing. You got the style of them talking really well, and the use of the scenery is like in the book. All in all this is great!