Reviews for The Demon, the Dancer and the Betrayer
KatelySmiling chapter 11 . 12/3/2011
update
OsuMania chapter 9 . 3/19/2011
For some strange reason i found this story quite confusing at first but now it makes sense.
Starcloudy94 chapter 3 . 12/25/2010
this is good
Starcloudy94 chapter 2 . 12/25/2010
like this it's good
Starcloudy94 chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
like this
Void Sage chapter 11 . 12/6/2010
How the fuck do u only have 8 reviews? This is a great story, and I'm personally gonna favorite it. Great job, I like it.
ManicOne chapter 11 . 8/24/2010
Interesting and cool story. Please update soon. .
xXduchessXx chapter 11 . 10/11/2009
You...You bashed Lee! :O First time I've seen that... Love the story though!
Kuraitsuki Tukiko chapter 11 . 8/15/2009
Hurry up and write the fucking story! i'm only yelling cause i carw...XD
Sai'mne chapter 7 . 7/25/2009
SWEET!
Lexor chapter 11 . 5/11/2009
i really enjoy the chapter, but cme on they have had swords for 3 days and are strutting around in em like masters, i wanna see zabuza appear to put em in their place so badly, and then laugh at em!. Loved the test part too, see ya next time.
Shodatl chapter 11 . 5/3/2009
Hope you make the next chapter soon. instead of just posting a previously made story on your profile and not updating it.

But from what i can tell about you, you dont update often and cant make any original works for yourself.

So i hope this marvelous story gets the attention it deserves... if it doesnt that sucks that another talentless artist managed to rob random people from reading a great story.

Cant wait for the next chapter though... once you start it up on your own credit i will actually complement the work from you.

And in that case, i would be content in knowing that the story will be finished in time, so no pushing for updates either.

Overall i just hope the story is actually continued...

Good luck.
twilightserius chapter 11 . 5/2/2009
poo kill buto now hes an ass
You can run but you can't hide chapter 11 . 5/2/2009
Please update!