Reviews for The Fifth Star
No Longer Active Here chapter 21 . 1/23/2013
[Steve sings "Rock-a-Bye-Baby" to Tryhorn every night.' Millie started. 'Seriously?' 'I swear.'] Steve singing? Ha ha ha, that would be hilarious to see.

Oh, Em has made them fake beyblades so they can sneak the real ones in. Would be hard to leave their beloved partners behind.

Anyway, hope you write more!

Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 20 . 1/23/2013
I've finally remembered to review this story.

I hope you are still writing it, I want to know how it ends.

Will be interesting to see how the basic training camp goes.

Onto the next chapter!

Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 19 . 6/20/2011
Ha ha ha deranged hooligan.

Lol Michael freaked out about Trygle speaking like a butler.

~Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 18 . 6/20/2011
I've missed four chapters?

*gasp*

Lol crash course in beauty ha ha ha, good one.

Will Trygle be safe?

~Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 17 . 4/8/2011
Ha ha bickering like six year olds.

HA HA loved the remark about finger painting! I wanna see Michael do some! That would be hysterical.

More soon?

~Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 16 . 4/8/2011
Ooo Michael and Trygle talking, sweet. I love Trygle.

Wonder what the meaning is behind the dream? Obviously, it's something to do with the relationship between Michael and Millie. Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.

~Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 15 . 4/8/2011
ALL STARZ RULE!

I'm not really sure what else to say.

Lol at Steve asking for what 'surreptitious' means. Bonus points for not being able to pronounce it.

~Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 14 . 4/8/2011
Whoa it's certainly been awhile, I was certain I had reviewed these chapters. But I guess not.

Haha Michael being an idiot. He's an enjoyable character to read about.

Throwing a baseball at the wall. Typical.

~Aquila
kishe chapter 17 . 4/6/2011
keep it up!
Red - Eyed - Raven 93 chapter 14 . 3/23/2011
Wow, it's been a while. But it's ok, you're forgiven. I admit that one of the greatest hindrances in writing is a major EXAM. :P. Not much action going around here except that Michael's still acting a sore loser. Argh, I think I'm beginning to hate him already! I hope you can catch up now this summer break.

Kudos,

R-E-R93
nehamerchant123 chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
Hey I have a question how old are? And does this take place during V-Force or after they beat by the Bladebreakers in the first season?
nehamerchant123 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

ALL THIS WAITING IS DRIVING MME NUTS!

TELL ME YOU'LL UPDATE SOON RIGHT?

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!
nehamerchant123 chapter 13 . 12/16/2010
i just recently read your fanfic and it's AMAZING! PLS UPLOAD SOON PLS PRETTY PRETTY PLS!
No Longer Active Here chapter 13 . 12/12/2010
I'm curious to see what happens between Michael and Millie.

Will Michael get Trygle examined?

Update when you can,

~Aquila
No Longer Active Here chapter 12 . 5/27/2010
You know, I've never read a MichaelxOC fic before. I'm glad someone is willing to step out the square and write something for the underused characters.

So looking forward to seeing where this goes and hoping chapters will be longer.

~Aquila
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