I still love this story no matter how many times I read it. Probably not going to get an update after all these years, but a girl can dream.

This fic is awesome! Right up until the part where it doesn't go anywhere. I love the way you have set out the cat-and-mouse games and was so disappointed to reach the end of what you have written.

Gaaaah why is there no next chapter?! That's cruel!

Super captivating! Can't wait to really meet jaynes family and see their reaction to the crew. Please continue!

I like this story. Keep writing.

I had nearly decided to delete this from my subscription list, thinking it was abandoned like so many other excellent fics on this site. Glad I didn't; an angel must have whispered in my ear. Very glad to see you return to this.

Really glad you've picked up this story again after such a long hiatus (at least it wasn't 40 years in the desert).

Great to see how clever Jayne is being, and I look forward to seeing the significance of Sergeant Sumner and his mysterious resemblance to Jayne.

Yay! Let's here it for story alerts!

Carry on, good author! I will gladly continue reading. Good story.

I'd forgotten that I had set up this story to follow so it was a nice surprise to see a new chapter pop up. After just the first few lines, all the story particulars had come back and I was happily reading away. Thanks for updating.

Fantastic.

OMG where did this come from? Great story I really hope you plan on continuing. I like the way you have portreyed the characters. You've got Zoe, Mal and Simon down pat, excellent job. I really like where you are taking Jayne and River, your reasoning for Jayne's changing is very good as well. Nara and Kaylee are in character but just haven't had big parts yet. The way you are going through the action sceens at the Cobb farm and the ship are great, moving quickly yet interesting and excitting.

PLEASE PLEASE continue

Been readin' this story for a while now, and DAMN but I'm glad you've started updating it again. New chapter is the best so far, keep at it.

This is like finding a nugget of gold
The characterisations I really thought he had River in the sack and I am thinking oh no Jayne not River
The "So much looking after " comments
This is shiny

Ohh, man, you've GOT to update this one, It's just too good! Jayne boiled and distilled, 200 proof. Can't wait to see Mattie say "told ya so" to the blue hands or commander.

I always wondered what it would be like if Jayne ever went truly Medieval on someone, and this is WAYYYY past what i thought would happen. I mean, I knew he was a badass, but HOLY SHIT!