Sam-Chan: Great fanfic!

Jason-Kun: WTF! Why does Itachi sound like a teenage emo girl! And why does Madara sound like...You know what? Just fuck this shit!

Sam-Chan: Jason-Kun, that's not very nice..

Jason-Kun: Screw being nice! I'm out!

CONGRADULATIONS! you've written the first MadaraXItachi story ive ever Faved! Brava for you! -grins-

lol lovely!

Ok so I love madaIta, the world need more of it!

And I really liked it, the sex scene was hawt: 3 good work write more madaita? *w*

Pretty good. Perhaps put some spacing between paragraphs, but other than that, great!

I wuv Madara fics-especially MadaIta ones! I can't wait for more great work in the future! ;)

Surprisingly enough, I'm awake in time to review. Don't take it the wrong way though since it is 2 A.m...O_o I should not be awake, lol. Right, the review.

I found the story quite intoxicating, maybe it's due to the sure lack of Madaita or just because i'll like anything angst-like. It was a bit straining though to read each line due to the paragraphs clinging to each other. I suggest you seperate them a bit with indents.

P.s: Dont worry, if this is your first Lemon. Mine sucked terribly, then again it was for Itanaru :3.