| Reviews for Tension |
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  gin chapter 1 . 7/3/2016 loved it! :) |
 themirrorminder.372259 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012 This was beautifully written. Wonderful job! |
| SilverandInk chapter 1 . 3/18/2012 It's been a while since you've published this but I just wanted to comment on how well-written this fic is. Most IchigoxRukia sexual tension fics oversimplify their relationship to straightforward attraction but like you've captured, there's much more to their dynamic and characters. Your writing style is flawless as well. Great Job! |
| LunaBianca chapter 1 . 6/22/2011 Love this. How you illuminate thoughts and motives for both Rukia and Ichigo with an ambiguous narrator, more stream of consciousness. The parenthetical asides. Micro paragraphs. And most of all the credibility of their thoughts and interaction. This story is a lot like how I see their relationship. Thanks for not rushing them. |
| Roswalyn chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 Love it! Very sweet without being sappy. I loved the graph analogy for their relationship. :) |
| curlycat chapter 1 . 9/3/2009 this is adorable - you really seemed to have captured the essence of ichigo and rukia's relationship. x |
| toni chapter 1 . 8/7/2009 wow, neat and well-written. good job! i enjoyed it a lot :D |
| Clewilan chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 You described them perfectly, really, it was great, you can be proud :D Thank you ! |
| sadobunny chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 i love how you paint this picture of ichigo as a teenage boy and rukia as slightly maturer but just as stupidly in love as he is. the ending was maybe a bit disapointing but i thought ti was quite sweet. |
| somebody's world chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 This is really good! I'm glad you posted it. I love IchiRuki and it's been a while since I've read a good oneshot for them. :D |
| Mrs Pierre Bouvier chapter 1 . 5/22/2009 I loved this so much! |
| WDO chapter 1 . 5/8/2009 I like it :) I loved the ending though and your summary, it just drawed me in, I mean its really hard to try and define what the heck thats going on between those two. I really admire that you could describe it really well. Good job! :) |
| Masayume91 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009 Very descriptive. :D me likes! |
| JxC chapter 1 . 4/30/2009 That was really nice, well-written and hot at the same time. I would love to see some more IchiRuki by you- you show their relationship very well. The only thing I regret is that they didn't do anything to "resolve" said tension, if you know what I mean XD |
| Jeni.G chapter 1 . 4/30/2009 It was so great! Oh My God! But I was kind of hoping that they would kiss. Oh, well.. it was great anyway! |
