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Esta es el final o que yo quiero que continue porfa continua

Has la secuela de este fic esta buenisimo porfa

ADD MORE plz...

If I have anything to say about this story it's this:

This story Kicks $$ as far as any Renamon story I've read. I kinda wish there were more "Renamon being discovered" Stories out on the web. All I've got is Deviantart, and

That WAS a masterpiece!

You could do a sequel, maybe develop an actual romance between them?

Your wrong..This IS a masterpiece. I can find no fault with it, except the long explanations of what digimon are...But other then that, its airtght, and I would like to see more:-p

Hey, this is a great job. Personally, I'd say that the two were suppressing their...desires, because you've been setting this up as a great yuri...but then again, I often prefer the soft shoujo-ai's. They're almost theraputic for me when I get stressed. I think it's great (and kind of funny) how they took a bath together, and then got angry when they were accused of being lesbians. It sounds like you're almost hinting at a personal bias against homosexuals, or furotica in general. Or maybe a fear of being flamed by conservatives. You harped on it repeatedly, try to make your personal oppinions a bit more subtle and not so jarring, it sometimes startled me out of the romantic mood, which was otherwise well developed. Stick with what you feel!

Keep going, it's a great story.

...and that's not just the monsterous Renamon fan in me talking, lol.

Oh, by the by...great imagery with the painting, it was nice and vivid, I could almost picture it.

nice story you got here ...continue it please

please continue, you are a good writer.

a little bit of info regarding the makino family

seiko hata the grand mother

reiko makino mother

ruki makino Renamons tamer

I think its very sweet. I have written a renuki fic but it didn't turn out well. So I changed to the Rukan Hisashi Idea. It's worked out great. oh look at me I've become a walking talking comercial. What I am trying toget at is, when you write with your heart people recognise it. _

Cool! Good job.

it's got it all. Love, Hate, Battles, and of course digimon. It does however get a bit monotoneus int the middle but i liked it anyway!

Hi..hehe..its me nicole, your story is really good. Hope you continue to write some more..keep up the good work!

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