| Reviews for Reality |
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   cathern.cain chapter 1 . 11/14/2016 Well done story. A little more detail on what Koenma had to do and find out would have been nice but still a good story. |
| Gest chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 It dose not seemed finished. Add more to it please. |
| Anonymous Alaina chapter 1 . 3/22/2015 Absolutely beautiful. Bravo! Bravo! |
| Vamptisha chapter 1 . 5/21/2014 this is an ok one shot _ |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2013 Good story, but how is Kagome alive? She died in his arms or is Hiei dead now? Also is their child alive as well or dead? Please answer! |
| Valleygoat chapter 1 . 7/23/2012 awe a happy ending,those are always nice. a little confused on how she can be dead but alive though. |
| whisperfur chapter 1 . 6/27/2012 ok i can understand the annoyance of ppl begging for sequels (i always feel more guilty than anything but i have a busy job and writing is just a hobby) but kagome is...was dead right? i really liked it until the end did he somehow bring her back? is she just a spirit waiting for him? was she not really dead and drug her carcass out of her grave like sango? you kinda hopped from one reality to another, strange place where the grass is pink and im very confused and wondering if my coworkers slipped me something to have me live alittle! lol if there was another chapter to explain her it might help the ending but dont bend over backwards on my account this is just my thoughts on the matter and like you said its just a one-shot, just a little something to get the writing juices flowing so to speak. well i enjoy your writing and hope to see more of that miko mother story your rewriting and take your time i feel the less forced you are the better the story flows atleast it is for me. |
| I See Dead Animals chapter 1 . 11/15/2010 awww! so cute! |
| BB'sPartnerInCrime chapter 1 . 10/10/2010 aww i just lv hiei and kagome paringsXD |
| Moon of the West chapter 1 . 3/28/2010 I'm sure others have asked this question, but how is Kagome alive at the end? You say that these flashbacks are Hiei's memories, yet Kagome is hugging him at the end. Can you explain this please? Other than that, I thought this story was well done and touching. Good job! ~ Moony 3 |
| Snow Ahriman chapter 1 . 3/15/2010 Hearing that there will be no more makes me sad...but how did she come back? |
| DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 aww... so cute... |
| Rhianna224 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009 love it |
| RebornRose1992 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009 sad...but i dont get the last part? |
| Kyprish Prophetess chapter 1 . 5/17/2009 Now I'm confused. Is he dead? Or did she come back? Or, does the well have something to do with this? |
