i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love when Bella & Edward hang out together

Cute story thanks for sharing!

I think this is a really cute idea. Loving it so far.

I can't read this anymore. This is a disgrace! It's disgusting! SHES BEEN PRACTICALLY FLIRTING AND LOVING JUDE ALL WEEK! CHEATING ON EDWARD! THEN SHE MAKES OUT WITH HIM AND TONGUES HIM! CHEATING ON EDWARD! AND ITS ALL EDWARDS FAULT APPARENTLY! BITCH CHEATER HYPOCRITE STUPID ASS CUNT!

WTF SHES SUCH A BITCH! A HYPOCRITE! IF THAT WAS EDWARD WITH A GIRL DOING THAT YOU WOULD KILL HIM! BUT ITS NOT OK FOR HIM TO GET MAD! WHAT THE FUCKING HELL! SHE HAS A BOYFRIEND! AND SHE SO OBVIOSILY DOSNT CARE ABOUT HIM! Poor Edward! Always poor Edward!

What happened with that weird number that texted Edward? And the girl that traced his face with her fingers and lips? And the girl he kissed and also ran off? Was that Bella? Because he said it felt familiar and later that day when Bella traced his face it was the same pattern

I JUST WANT TO SLAP BELLA AND ALICE ESPECIALLY BELLA! WTF IS WRONG WITH HER! HE DID NOTHING WRONG! IF SHE ACTUALLY LOOKED AT IT FROM HIS POV! UGH IVE ALWAYS FUCKING HATED BELLA!

Alice and Bella are just pathetic

I have no idea why Bella is so upset. Nor, do I se why Alice is. Everything that happened in this chapter, happened because of that skank Lauren pulling a fast one. She knew exactly what she was doing, she dyed her hair and then sat in Bella's seat. The ones that Bella and Edward both should be mad at, are their so called friends and family. They let Lauren sit there and said nothing! Shame on them. She's never sat at their table before and it was a mistake on Edwards part. Instead, Bella was incredibly immature and refused to speak to Edward about it. Basically letting zlauren win. She knows Lauren has been trying to get her hooks into Edward, her falling for this makes Bella incredibly stupid. Then when he goes to Bella and he witnesses his girlfriend on another guys lap saying they love each, is FAR, FAR worse than the simple mistake Edward made in the cafeteria. Yes, Emmett and Bella have been friends forever, and they love each other in the brother sister way, that doesn't make it clear to Edward when he walks in on that disgrace of her straddling Emmett saying she loves him. Exactly how would Bella feel if she walked in on that? She would be destroyed. And, why in the hell would any teen believe someone saying they have cancer at their age? Not many. So no, Bella is the one that is one hundred percent wrong in this situation. She is the one who should apologize to Edward. Alice being pissed at Edward turning to a letter to tell Bella how sorry he is, when that is exactly how they communicate, is ridiculous. Effing ridiculous. Alice is wrong as well. Although, from the way you've written Bella and Alice's responses, it'll be Edward that had to grovel. For. No. Reason!

The way these two act towards each other, I have to keep reminded myself that they are just teens. So they childish behavior makes complete sense, if I constantly remind myself. I'm just used to when Twilight teens are written, it is usually with a lot mare maturity then this. My best gues at the ending and his arm around a brunette, is that it's Lauren and she dies her hair from its frizzy blonde, to brown, to try to capture Edward. Sadly, he truly thought it was Bella. Let's hope it is Angela, who hasn't been mentioned in this story yet. Because, even if Lauren dies her hair, her cloying perfume would still be present. So basically, with how these two have been acting, childish, she won't forgive him after assuming the worst. It will be Laurena no she'll rub it in whenever she can. It'll be a big ass thing, because they can't communicate. Ugh.

Wow, it's hard to believe it's been a week without power ina snow storm. That seems like a long time, right? Maybe it's normal in snowy places. I wouldn't know having been born, raised and still living in San Francisco Bay Area, as we don't ever get snow. It was sweet that they established boyfriend/girlfriend status. Very glad that Bella's house was able t get power and that BxE made it ther slowly, yet safely. Poor Alice must've been crazy board all alone there. Elliot and touching Edward's hair, was rude of Elliot, yet amusing that he couldn't help it.

That was a good chapter with a big step for them both. They hashed out how they felt and then took the time to think over what they really wanted. Deciding to go for it. I am happy they made a decision that scared them. When you are that young, every choice you make seems like make or break. They can be together and fall in love. They may not make it in the long run but, at least they've tried. Otherwise, they may have a serious case of the 'what-if's' going through their heads forever. Now they'll know. I like that he wrote that he thinks he's met her. That was sweet. Wonder what is wrong with Alice and the group? I hope they're okay.

I was wondering when she would realize what a hypocrite she was being, by reading Edward's letters, the same way he read hers. I rather liked the addition of Elliot, and with him, his telling Bella she's being a hypocrite. Thankfully, she agreed. Not sure what his letter stated, unless it was the one he wrote that night after he and Alice climbed the tree, but it sunk in and got her talking. I'm glad she's at his house, stuck in the snow. Not sure the girls and Elliot are as pleased about being stuck where they are without Bella. I'm happy they talked things out and are back on the path of potential couple. All snuggled down on the couch.

Staring is what one does when looking at a person for a long period of time. Starring is what one does when acting in a lead role of a movie, play or on television. Well, that didn't go well at all. It was nice to learn that Bella still likes Edward, yet is just hurt by learning he had read them. Alice inadvertently giving Bella his letters to him, in lieu of Bella's, was a bit interesting. We knew she'd read his too, just didn't expect it this soon. What I'd like to know is how Edward was climbing a tree, having just had surgery to repair his collapsed lung, his broken ribs and broken leg? The doctor had said he broke his leg and cracked ribs, on top of a concussion and the surgery for the collapsed lung. 'Taking it easy', does not mean climb a tree with a broken leg and healing rib fractures. As a matter of fact, I don't think, due to the lung, he would be able to breathe through the pain, of just the broken ribs, enough to climb that tree. Let alone with a broken leg.

His call to her in the wee hours of the morning, was really cute. It was sad to to learn he called because he had a night terror. Loved his story, it was cute. It was very kind of Bella's parents to let her go and pick up hers and Edward's homework for the week. Allowing her to spend time with Edward and his parents in Seattle, as long as she got her work done and didn't fall behind. I liked that Esme and fenèe were talking back and forth, planning it all out. Their rousing ga,e of Uno, leading to a kiss, was sweet too. Sherry is all kinds of wonderful. I liked that Esme snapped the photo of when Edward had just woken and kissed the top of Bella's head. He got sprung for the hospital and she now knows where he lives.