Lovely. Heartaching, the good kind.

Wow, I really love this! "It’s not love because their hearts aren’t beating" is a really powerful and sort of morbidly beautiful line, and I think it's the one that stood out the most to me. But the whole thing is really well-written, and I love your style. I hope you don't mind if I favorite you and this story!

Nice.

An example, I think, of how telling can be just as cool as showing.

(second paragraph of part ii oh god yes)

But yeah. Loved it. And the rest of your TWEWY fic.

Oh god Eri/Shiki, yess. And breathtakingly beautiful, at that. Beautiful wording, syntax, structure - just beautiful.