Anyone else think it's weird that Bella sees her moms love for adventure as flighty and feels like she's the parent? All I saw was a little no nothing girl stopping her mom from having dreams. If your mom wants to go sky diving she should be able to! Bella is boring and without meeting the Cullens she would have lived a very boring life. A life with no adventure. Because bella clearly thinks that adventure is synonymous with trouble. And we all know how overly clumsy she is. Which some fan fic writers write to a point of it being a fucking handicap. But the real problem here is this, if she really feels like a parent...or even a daughter, isn't funny how fast she decides to give them up in trade for a life with Edward?

Bella with all of her supposed low self esteem didn't really think twice about a guy like Edward wanting to be around her. I would think that if her self esteem was really that low she would reason that Edward wanting to go on a date with her was really just a joke and she would decline the offer as such.

Seriously? Nothing has ever looked better than peanut butter and jelly?

This seems nothing like Bella, like theres too much of the writer in here.

Their initial conversation was REALLY BORING. And Bellas thoughts are just kinda embarrassing "its the first day of school and im like totally going on a date with the hottest guy on the planet"...she sounds like Jessica. And I cant help but to think that IF Edward could read her mind he would dismiss her in a heartbeat. Your version of Bella isn't special, shes just some stupid immature girl. Having her make fun of fat people? How tacky.

So everything is the same except Bella is blind and alittle bitter? And there seems to be more meddling by Alice.

So, this is just like the original story except more annoying?

I don't like the start.

Oh wow great story. Hope you continue it one day.

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