Amazing story.. I absolutely loved it and the way you portrayed the characters we just perfect.. This is the first Yumi and Ikka pair I've come across and I'm loving it... Thanks for the great story/lemon.

DAYUUUMMMMM THAT WAS GOOODDDDD PLEASE MAKE A SECOND CHAPTER TO THIS

oh my gosh! i loved it soooo much! this was the sexiest of ikka-yumi i've ever read! 3 gochisousama deshita! fufu

ikkaku is soo cute when awkward lml

I love your story and you used my favorite bleach couple so great job.

NICE...no really that was hot and...yeah

Liked very much!

That was really detailed. _

I love this pairing and this fic. there are some grammer issues but not many. good luck with your next story!

That was so hot! They are the perfect couple! (and they hace hot sex!)

It was really good, but you need to slow down and use spell check when you write. Other than that...-insert fangirlish scream here- I liked it. :3

well this is not a yaoi couple i would normaly go 4 but i ejoyed it :D it was well layedout to and sweet!

lemon was HOT to XP u did well

(is sitting at her computer with a big stupid smile on her face)

Well... that was delicious. And well-written, too, which is rare in lemony stuff. It was really sweet to see the non-smex interaction as well, with Yumi leaning on Ikka's shoulder and being so insistent on Ikka's beauty. And it seemed pretty IC.

Very nice lemon. I'm usually too chicken to review and admit that I'm actually a huge raging perv but this one was too sweet to pass up.

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-WK