That was amazing. Keigo, Mizuiro, and Tatsuki are great. Keigo would make an awesome assassin. I'm so proud.

Wow, amazing and accurate character profiles. Last line is the most perfect way ever to describe Ichigo.

Simply incredible. Bravo. Not only did you capture the cast perfectly, you included roles for the seemingly forgotten Tasuki, Keigo and Mizuiro, something I had always expected to happen in canon but never did. Well done.

I love this. It gives attention to all the characters who SHOULD have gotten attention in the original series and gives it to them in all the right ways.

Interesting. Very poetic as well. I especially like how you're able to tell the story of an entire war in a one-shot. Keep up the good work.

Absolutely fenomenal. Explores angles I never even considered, with beautiful word choice.

this is beautiful and in all honesty pretty close to cannon great job

this was pretty fucking good. I enjoyed this.

This is beautiful I hope you know you have potential to become a published author keep up the goo.. no great work.

This was beautiful.

This was very well done and something I needed just now. Thank you for posting it!

-Kai

Nice! _

amazing job! I love the way you really went into detail with them and even had slight A/U . It was cool seeing what they could be doing ! This is really nice and I loved each part! :)

...I...have no words to express how this made me feel. It is...amazing. Beautiful. So damn beautiful. It speaks to the bottom of my soul, makes me shake in a whirlwind of emotions...damn. I love how you portrayed each and every human character, even the ones most often forgotten. They do not seem the slightest bit out of character, they, somehow, seem more REAL than ever...wow. Simply wow.

Thank you, thank you, for writing this and posting it for us all to read.

Best Wishes,
Duchess

This is... beautifully written, and fits the characters well.