| Reviews for On love and sex |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 Make it as a video ! |
bill08550 chapter 1 . 4/18/2019 I want to watch the video |
SoulMore chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 FAN! |
Buttersaurus chapter 1 . 6/30/2014 Nice story :3 |
serendipityrain711 chapter 1 . 4/16/2014 The line "when they fought they may as well have sex" is spot on with Kyman. Fighting I'm sure is like foreplay to them. It's so true when you said cartman completes kyle because without him I don't think he would feel as alive. That circumcise and big boned joke was hilarious! Oh cartman is the best! |
Icyclear chapter 1 . 9/4/2013 Very sweet and very likely |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2013 really wonderful story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2012 Wow, this one's really cool. Thanks a lot for sharing this piece. |
symphknot chapter 1 . 9/30/2012 Wow... |
xEmerald Isle chapter 1 . 12/24/2009 This was really hot! I love Kyman! Nice job! |
Figure.10 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 AW! I love it! It's so fucking...just awesome. Awesome in so many ways. |
Jade Watson chapter 1 . 4/28/2009 i'm not sure if i should say the story was cute... or just plain hot.. either way works i guess, but im not sure call a guy giving another guy a handjob cute... or any handjob cute for that matter, so i'll just stick with hot. anyways! i like this fanfic, so i faved it. XD well, simply put, it was interesting. abeit the handjob, it was a cute fanfic. i know you probably wont plan on it, but could you at least consider a sequal? back to main point, to sum everything up. i loved this oneshot. |
screamxaimxfire chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 SQUEE! This just seriously made my day. And the end made me so happy. Please keep writing! _ |
kyleisgod chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 I have good and bad things to say about this fic. First of all, nice usage of Jew jokes. Secondly, I like how Kyle humored Cartman and played along with the jokes. That seems realistic of boyfriend!Kyle x Cartman. I love your reason for putting them together. I loved that the sex distracted them from hatred. That's a rarely seen but buyable reason IMO. I like how Cartman told Kyle to stop being a fag. Very in-character. However, I didn't like how you have Kyle blushing and giggling. Honestly, what BOY blushes when he gets his junk touched? Especially if it's being touched by someone he presumably already has an established relationship with, which you made it sound like the characters did. You also skimped on a lot of the details such as what room they were in, what they were wearing, etc. A good first attempt though. You have potential. Just keep on writing and you'll get there. |
Unavailable 101 chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 Ah, This just getting better and better _ I'm assure that they're both in love with each other ;) |