Nice, though this is sad.

Why would you write this?

Eek! Gave me chills. No no no! I have to give you credit for a story well-written, even if I didn't like the ending (

oh my god...that was so beautiful.

i am crying. full on tears. that was just so amazing.

well done, keep it up :')

Very good read! Very, very sad, and well written xD From the summary I was expecting something a lot more cliched! But you did a great job with this!

Ah, but that was brilliant! DO it again do it again!

That last line made me choke up. :) Beautifully written and I enjoyed it very much.

This made me tear up...

that was so sad! and very heartbreaking. in a good way.

only one criticism - "livid", not "lived", but i guess that's a typo.

well done!