Reviews for The Scorpion
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Why?! Why you have to killeded them?!
Very well done. One can feel the gentle, demented madness in both of them. They seem like broken people and, morbid though suicide or murder (I can't quite tell which) is, it seemed like a fitting ending for this set up. Now, excuse me while I go fix my feels. X)

Wonderfully in character, sad and lovely.
Well done!

MyneComixMeg
musicalbutterfly605 chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
O.O

you killed them!

but it was a well-written death...:)

I almost didn't finish that cos heights scare the weasels outta me...
Amaranth the Immortal chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
that sent shivers down my spine *shudders*... GOOD JOB! :D
Thunder's Winged Heart chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
I love it!
Erika Dyer chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Oh Wow! This was brilliant. Erik was very much in character, and i loved the bit about the scorpion stinging. just like the grasshopper hops!