It's so cute. I like it. It's good.

I think it's the part where Mikan fell asleep while doing it with Natsume.

I love this! You're so good :D

Uhmmm that was sooo ahhh hot i like it whoo gotta whoo i love it

Please pardon my language but while reading this the only thought's going through my head were 'what the f*** and I reading, what the h*** am I reading...'
I think it was really good but really funny.

3 hottt

nice one love it yehey they will have a child i wish it is a twin boy and girl like your other story!:}

gasp its nice gosh im a pervert!

Awww cute and awsome way to torture natsume ! XD

this is really funny. good lemon too!

I've read this before~

But I just realized~

Wasn't Natsume naked when he knelt down and asked Mikan to marry him~?

n_n

That's hilarious~

Loved it!I can't believe I just read that, it was so hot, I'm actually going to try Mikan's revenge as well. Thanks for the idea! Please write more stories with mikan and natsume, all the ones you write are so good!Thanks for the update and plz write more!

this story is damn hot!

keep up the good work!

realy really good...nice ending btw

I LOVE IT!

But I have to ask, where did you get the 'A.' for Mikan's middle name? Did you just go with a letter or something?