Lol, I love the vocaloid fanloids xPI'm happy I found a fanfic 'bout them xD

I have a question. Who are Rein and Karin? Are they suppose to be fanmades of Len and Rin? If so, what's their last name?

TT_TT KikuXTaito has to be the greatest vocaloid pairing ever.. It was so amazingly written, and I envy your writing style. *kowtow*

m(_ _)m *bow; grovel* ~I'm subscribing~

Hrm... I noticed a few errors, and you'd go from present tense to past tense in the same sentence sometimes, and switched from first to third person, too. Uh... You had dialogue in the same paragraph, so I couldn't tell who was talking sometimes.

I dunno, though, the story's kind of weird... I'm not sure what to say about it. I think the ending was a bit sudden. I like that Lin and Ren were used, though! Keep it up.

Ren and Lin! _ Hmm... Ren mentioned Rei and Mikuo was there... Sounds like a meme someone did. *accusing look*

No errors that I noticed, but the stuttering outside of dialouge was pretty annoying and a bit hard to read.

Also there were times when Lin/Mikuo would start talking after Ren had, but you didn't start a new paragraph.

And another thing I have to nitpick about is how you switched from a first person point of view to a third person POV abruptly once or twice.

Aside from that, it's great! I'm so happy to see the fanmades being used! _

I really liked it!

You probably won't believe me, but actually, I'm the Lin roleplayer on DA. xD;

Thank you for writing something about them! . / v / .

Uhm...

The twins names are

Kagami Ne Re N

Kagami Ne Ri N

But, Because of something I don't know about, Len is used instead of Ren. Just like Luka.

But Rin is still Rin! No Lin. just like no Nelu.