like this here chapter I do very neat it is

like it I do

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Great story. I really enjoyed reading this. I hope maybe one day it will be finished.

Maybe one day i will see an date. I can hope

I've really enjoyed reading this. I found it on a list of stories that have Bella being a vampire from the start, so I did not expect to see her as a hybrid. It's unfortunate to see that it hasn't been updated in a while.

Sad that this was never finished. It's difficult to find good twilight fabrication.

I love it but I think she should show more of her power. Let me know please.

I love that it was Bella who stopped the van.

Please tell me that one day you will finish this. I will leave it in my fallow file with hope in my heart.

this was perfect.

I say again I like this story and the way Bella and Edward are relating. please quit apologizing for being slow, life happens. just keep writing

I love the first part of this but I see it is not complete. I hope the things in your life that drew you away will one day allow you to finish. I am thinking she is a high bred.

Great story so far, please finish it sometime!

can't wait to find out what happens next especially when Bellas father Charles comes home also be interesting to find out what happens if Charles finds Edward with Bella on her bed.