Reviews for Naruto of the Four Dojutsu
jackmylad 2 chapter 1 . 6/19
Thank you for not putting that bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeping stupid bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeep in the harem she can bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeping did for all I bleedeeeeeeeeeeeeping care
ShadisNightShade chapter 1 . 10/22/2019
I know you don't want to here this from a guest but the rinnigan alone has unintentionally made him a god. You are giving him that and so much more.

Ignore typos this is from a phone
chaosincarnated chapter 4 . 9/9/2019
I like what you did with the eyes and here comes the but I would have combined the Sharingan and the rinnagan to make it like Sasuke's at the end of Shippuden and I would have combined the Bakugan and the other dojutsu making it look like the other dojutsu with the veins more pronounced just like the Bakugan. But they can separate and when they do naruto will grow the second pair of eyes so Naruto won't draw too much attention to himself. Well more than he already does.
Fanfic9000 chapter 6 . 2/10/2019
Mercy, MERCY, I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING, OH MY GOD THIS IS THE MOST HILARIOUS THING I HAVE EVER READ, THIS IS AWESOME, Ow my sides.
can't wait till the story is finished.
Andy narin chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
shizune
Guest chapter 5 . 11/11/2018
It's kubikiribocho you baka
HarukaTsukinoTenoh chapter 17 . 10/10/2018
i just loved the Kiba bashing chapters, is there gonna be any in the re - write?
OmegaTakuTachi chapter 4 . 10/6/2018
No not sasusaku please I’ll do anything!
gabelou1991 chapter 5 . 9/19/2018
J'aime la sélection j'aurai mis tsunami mais bon dommage.
gabelou1991 chapter 4 . 9/19/2018
Je reste sur mon choix.
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 9/19/2018
Mon choix est
Anko
Kurenai
Yugao
Tsunami il en manque
Soit Hana ou shizune
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 9/18/2018
Anko mei Samui et peut être Kurenai.
Junior VB chapter 17 . 6/22/2018
Podría ser mejor.
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It could be better.
zoni chapter 2 . 6/16/2018
you should have combined the dojutsu in his eye. you can come up with your own design or just combine all the pattern. cuz i dont know about you but its weird haveing 4 eyes
Hero100100 chapter 17 . 3/13/2018
talk about a cliffhanger for 7 years.I hope you decide to continue this story now if not that's a big shame.I enjoyed the story except for you Bashing Kiba and the idea of having the harem only be 10 girls it's okay but you should have made it 18 girls in the means that she could have made the 18 girls or 20 girls in the harem instead of the 10 girls in the you picked for the girls in the harem.
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