| Reviews for Achilles |
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kimi-ebi chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 Well done ! It was realistic, really ! Plus, I laughed at some parts, something I didn't really expect while reading texts about Roberto and Johann :). Thank you so much for this one, it was amazing ! kimi-ebi |
Yuukilover chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 Nice character analysis of Johan! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2013 I LOVED IT! I couldn't stop laughing on some parts. Also you got his personnally on the dot. There one thing is that he does try to kill Anna so the part about him not wanting to kill her is off but beside that it ROCKS |
Convenient Alias chapter 1 . 5/11/2013 Well this is a nice story (well not story, more like character study but definitely nice). It kind of explains why even though Johan wants to keep Tenma and Nina alive, Roberto has still tried to kill both of them. Which never made much sense to me. If he had succeeded, Johan definitely would have killed him. |
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 Extremely well done! Definitely faving this! |
Shadowking7797 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013 The descriptions for Johan were both hillarious and accurate! And the dream Roberto had about Nina... that was priceless XD. |
breadbutterpudding chapter 1 . 3/16/2012 Oh Roberto, you tackle the serious subject of Johan Liebert hilariously. You should've been a comedian as a side-job from all that killing XD Brilliant writing style and beautiful depth! |
Like a Snowflake chapter 1 . 4/25/2011 So I was smiling and nodding the whole time I read this. You got Roberto's thoughts down...perfectly. And you mentioned the similarity of Johan and Tenma's hairstyles! I've been waiting for someone else to notice that without me telling them! Great job :) |
Hermy31 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010 This fic was actually one of the last fics I read from your ff page (prolly because Roberto's name on the summary has eluded me from reading it). When I read this fic, I couldnt help but to relate this fic to your other titles like 'Disciple', 'Autogynephilia' and 'Twins and Apple Strudels'. It makes sense! I love the ways , Roberto wasnt always a well-liked character in the manga,but I fell in love with how you wrote his character in this fic and in the 'Disciple'! And lol, the funniest part is when you brought up how Johan has the same hairstyle as Tenma and Nina's panties. That's GENIUS! Also, after reading your Johan/Nina centric fics, I'm glad to choose reading this fic for last. It's really refreshing to read another character's point of view on Johan. :D |
ravenwax789 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this story yet! I love it when you write from the perspectives of various characters. This one was especially humorous-the dream Roberto had was my favorite part. Also, the way you described the value of the accountant's hands and compared it to Johann's infatuation. |
1FtTall chapter 1 . 6/27/2010 Beautifully written and organized. |
johannaliebert chapter 1 . 5/29/2010 You cannot imagine how much this cracked me up! Honestly, i was already in tears a little after i started reading it! "Johan is one dangerous son of a bitch; a deadly motherfucker who will smile at you one minute and blow your brains out in the next." - this is the most perfect description of him! "and when you try to draw him into a conversation, he usually replies with some cryptic bullshit that has you cracking your brain for hours, trying to figure out what the hell he meant." - THIS! This is so, so, so true you don't know how funny it is. Thank you for you works. You are incredible. Keep it up! |
One percent chapter 1 . 5/14/2010 wow... This really is my favorite, and God knows how much I LOVED the others |
Kilasfd chapter 1 . 2/4/2010 I really like the dark humour in this and how you have Roberto narrate the whole story in his own special way. :D |
Gaaah chapter 1 . 1/30/2010 Great story, keep up the good work! ;) |