I really love this story.

To me it really does make a lot of sense lo ok king at the pack compared to real wolves that Jacob and Leah would be together.

The jokes and sarcasm were just amazing. One part that really made me mad was Sam trying to coddle Leah after her dad died. Like really?! Dont fucking touch me would have been my response too. After my dad passed I hated when people brought it up or would tell stories. The feelings of losing someone are very hard to deal with and sometimes people just want to be left alone.

One of my favorite parts to read was Bella being jealous. I always enjoy parts like that because I always felt bad for Jake. I just feel like she can be a very selfish person sometimes so its nice to see something thrown in her face. She always got her happy ending so its nice to see her not have everything sometimes.

WHYYYYYYYYY?!

Billy as a clown just killed me LMAO

I read this 10 years ago and I still think about how beautiful it is to this day

Beautiful...

I just love this story and this ending. Just so wonderful. I love Blackwater.

I am so thankful you didn't go with this ending. Love the story.

i know you wrote this a while ago - but i just want to tell you it's amazing. I love your humour - this story is so quotable. You gave so much life to Jacob and Leah as a character (he had way more than in the books).

This is great! you're really talented when it comes to writing characters and scenes. :)

First time to review, last time to review. I'm sorry that I didn't get the chance to follow this story from the first chapter. Though the story is overwhelming to finish in a few hours, I'm sure it was just as fun. Personally, I like this ending better, though would have I preferred if you gave Leah and Jacob a bit more time...but that's reality, right? It just can't be perfect. If you're living on earth, the sun always rises, and eventually sets, even if the shadows linger...
I certainly do not think I can express my thanks to the author enough for this amazing story. It was more about offering a whole new fitting perspective to an already great story. They tell you the best stories were the ones that make you laugh and cry at the same time, this one certainly did.
Heroes come and go, but legends are forever.

Amazing.

Go Jake, ripping into Sam!

I enjoyed this chapter, especially all the wolves on the phone.

Another great chapter, and thank you for the PM. I laughed at Leah saying Seth and Jake watching her sleep was creepy, which it is, but Bella let Edward do that all the time... *shudder*

An insightful but witty chapter.

I'm enjoying this so much!