| Reviews for Naruto: Outcast |
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   devmishra1234gmail.com chapter 2 . 1/2 I think i am crazy but naruto just defends konoha after he is banished...ahahhahahhahhaha...fuuuckkkk...maybe sasuke was right...what an idiot!hinata still couldnt gather the courage to tell him that she loved him...just coz she is afraid...even if ahe knew she moght never see him again...ahahhahhahaha...i guess its just plot convinience isnt it...well still i guess i gotta give u props for the idea...i might not like some of the things in the story but its still a good story |
| Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 10/27/2019 Sucks |
| random dino chapter 14 . 1/7/2019 god speep and a good life |
| Lol Inc chapter 11 . 10/29/2017 Lol the Kyuubi is a dog...xD(MrFox ain't doing too well as the "demon overlord" rn is he?) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2016 I sincerely wish you get a slow and painful death. |
| Mcclaine chapter 1 . 8/12/2015 Sorry but no, I cannot fathom how this plotline is so popular among writers when it's so so unrealistic. No government set up where being in the military for its major source of income would ever exile or decommission their ace in the hole weapon which is what naruto is. In a government ruled by ninja where the hokage has the authority and the elders who are also retired shinobi make these decisions hell would have to freeze over before these stories would be good no matter how well written it is. |
| coolchick87 chapter 13 . 5/22/2014 I am very upset u stop. NaruxHina831 never start the next chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2013 WTF this Naruto is a btch to Konoha! |
| CatariRay chapter 13 . 7/1/2013 im gonna cry now... |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/26/2013 "Well aren't you the little Romeo?" Kyuubi asked. "One more word and the chew toy is history." Naruto said to his tenent, not even looking up from his paperwork. Kyuubi shuffled a bit, putting a large paw on the toy. "My chew toy." He said to himself. *Shakes head* How the mighty have fallen. XD |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/26/2013 Naruto...you fucking troll XD |
| N0tMyName chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 Hinata said she loved naruto :D (everyone knows though) BUT SHE SAID IT OUT LOUD! |
| bishop chapter 13 . 7/25/2012 nice concept |
| Ancantsia chapter 13 . 5/29/2012 Kinda sad that you stopped writing this story as I was enjoying it. It was rather different from other exiled stories and If anyone out there is adopting it please inform me as I would love to read what happens :) |
| OnGuard chapter 14 . 4/24/2012 Well guess what jack ass, she has not even started, better find someone else. |
