FAN!~

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why danny go out with dash
is danny just gonna be left with unrequited feelings
and I bet this fanfic is super old

love it hope to see more

I loved it please update more

That was amazing! Love it! Poor Danny. Buuut, I like Danny's pain (call me sadistic. I don't care)! Love your stories!

Haha, hey, remember how Danny can like, you know, phase through shit? Cause ghosts fucking do that. Sorry, but this story was shit, and I'm not saying that to be mean. The characters are really poorly developed, nothing at all like the originals or at the very least given great, new characteristics. I'd also like to discuss the way the scenes were written. If someone's raped, they'll do whatever it takes to get away from it. There needs to be more detail, emotional details. Stop telling me everything and write it to where we are the character. Oh, and before you freak out, please take note that I took time out of my day to review this because I want to see better. You can do better than this shit.
P.s. Danny was way to apathetic and easily got over the rape far too easy.

i really like the part when vlad came to help. i thought he wasn't going to

Though you said you wouldn't, you should make another chapter.

Hey better idea, can I?

MAKE A ANOTHER CHAPTER

Ok. In my opinion I would never be able to unsee this in real life, nor would I ever do something like that. But it was a great story. Nice job. You discribed very well.

... what...

Poor Danny.. :(

Wait...so it was a dream? Meaning that nothing ever happened? Or that only the part with Vlad never happened? And the part at the end when you wrote ' I never got to hear his voice after the day that he Carried Me Home.'...does that mean that it DID happen and he just never saw him again or...? I don't quite get the ending if you haven't realized yet ;

BUT the ending that did make sense was sweet :)

Thank you for your hard work and effort

-AnT

please update, I won't ask when a new chapter will come out, but please update, I want to know what's gonna happen next, that's all, well other than that, later :D

I don't get it. Was Danny dreaming he got raped, or did he pass out at Dash's house and dreamed Vlad saved him?

awww poor Danny he got rape by Dash. Vlad should of killed Dash on the spot