I just finished this story and it's really good. I love it. Thank you.

FINISH THE STORY

Just wanted to drop bu to say I miss the story! Hope we still get a update!

OMG!

I just started to read this story and I love it..plz write more!

sasha from Madrid

Any chance after all this time you might finish this story? If you do, I put you on alert. I hope you do.

I love this story! Any updates coming?

I've been really enjoying this! I do hope you continue...I think you have something really special going on here :)

I think there are a few jumps without reason from one point to another at this point, like the story has already progressed in your mind but you haven't written it out

the whole thing is generally much more different from how the first few chapters were written

so far, everything is very realistic, I like it

but for some reason the age and voice of the story doesn't seem to always match up in my head, Jasper seems to be a little childish (maybe "innocent" is the right word I'm looking for) at times compared to what I would have thought he would be, very well done otherwise

I JUST SAT AND READ THIS WHOLE STORY THROUGH. I LOVE EDWARD AND JASPER TOGETHER! THESE TWO HAVE ALOT OF CHEMISTRY. WITH JASPER FEELING SO LOST AND IN LOVE WITH EDWARD AND EDWARD NOT WANTING TO SHARE HIS FEELINGS YOU HAVE SO MUCH MORE STORY TO TELL.

I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO MORE CHAPTERS AND I PUT YOU ON ALERT. I KNOW REAL LIFE GETS IN THE WAY, BUT I HOPE YOU WILL BE ABLE TO FINISH UP THIS STORY.

I LOVE IT,

LCULLEN

Wow, talk about being royally messed up. The rejection never ends, Maria has feelings for Jasper, Jasper has feelings for Edward and its clear Edward has feelings for Jasper as well but is too freaken stubborn to realize it.

I feel bad for Jasper but he is stupid in love. He keeps setting himself up to get hurt. Edward obviously isn't going to change his ways overnight. The best thing for Jasper to do is move out and try to move on. Jasper is so obsess with Edward it's scary and sad. He is so desperate for Edward's love he will take any form of affection from Edward he can get and secretly pushes his feelings aside. As if his feelings are not important. It's unsettling.

I'm curious if you are still going to finish this story like you claimed, considering it's been six months. It seems doubtful, but I hope you do because this is a great story, and I'm curious how it will all end, hopefully happily. ;)

I'm really loving this story you created. I love how your story flows naturally, making it very easy to read. I can't stand stories that are just one long paragraph with the author spending so much time describing one scene.

It's a very cute story with Edward being a mystery and Jasper denying his ever growing feelings for Edward. Your story actually reminds me of another story I read by OCDJen called Healing Hearts. I don't know if you ever read it before but it is a great story. It’s not exactly the same, but it has some similarities to yours. I got to say I actually like yours a little more than hers just because you break up the sentences making it easier to read.

OCDJen, is one of those authors that puts a lot of detail in her writing and has long paragraphs. I love her story too but I hate when authors do not split paragraphs, it make it so much more uncomfortable to read and harder to focus on and just makes me not want to take the time to read their stories. So, again, great story layout.

I do have one question though. Why did Jasper have to find a new apartment? What was wrong with his old one?

Time to finish this story so we can all see what happens to our two lovely boys

dying here! what is the deal w/ Edward? doesn't Drink and drive (GOOD...but his reaction was a bit *noticable*)... scar on his wrist... no friends...

am I on the right track here?

I just finish your story and i got to say is wow! i mean this is one of the best story i am read and i read a lot of them too. so please finish it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!