What, no "I love you"? :(

"So good" :)

I love this ukeishi but somehow seme Cloud god...it was too good im still cleaning the blood from my keyboard

Not just hot but very intimate too, wow, that was amazing. The love bond was really well portrayed.

~FM :)

Very hot! -

Okay, so I was totally thinking of how great it would be to find a yaoi like this and I find it. I love a Cloud who becomes unreserved in bed. Even better when he's with Zack. Kudos!

*BLUSH!* WOW short but sweet and HOT ! loved it :D

So hot and sweet

good job

*fave*

I love this fic because it's erotic and raunchy but cute and fluffy at the same time! Definitely faving this!

Lovely! (':

...O.o

...I LOVE you! Marry me and I shall be your slave!

*fans self to cool down her blushing face*

SMUTSMUTSMUTSMUTSMUTLOVE!

That was lovely and nicely worded. :)

Wow! Very sexy!

...or smexy I guess. LOL

Fics like this always put me in my place..

... as a yaoi fangirl forever!

That was both really cute and really, really hot. Oh my. -fans self- xD

This was such a lovely little gem, thank you for sharing!

*-RainbowSerenity-*

Mm, that was a really sweet interpretation of their love life- plus it was a really well written sex scene ~_ I also love how Cloud was on top, taking control of the situation while Zack enjoyed it so much. Nice play on character roles!