Yeah...bella acts like a huge bit**...like shes better than everyone

Bella sounds like a beoch

It's a been a while since you wrote this, but I just discovered Your story and read it in one day. I really loved it! Your characters are real teenagers, Jacob is wise beyond his years. You gave me a very relaxed Saturday afternoon curled up on the couch reading your story. Thank you so much!

That UnZip is everything

What is up with him? I'd love a glimpse into his head to see why he's such a dick...

i tried to keep going, but then this happened:

“Without answering my query, he countered, "What about you? Do you miss Phoenix?" I didn't question how he knew where I was from, because everyone knows everything in this tiny town.”

well he probably knows because she told him a few very short paragraphs before this part that she took AP bio back in phoenix.

only one chapter in and i already hate this bella. she’s full of herself and honestly she’s a bitch. no thank you.

Anyone other story were the author thinks the dad should get shit for visitation. I feel bad for dads out there a lot people must think children don't need a father. Your as bad as Stephanie Myers I always hope if she had children that her husband took note of what she thinks is proper visitation for a father discussing. Children need there father to. As long as the parent is not some sort of abuser or drug addict.

does bella have a std yet?

ya bella your not a virgin...Edward knows all about deflowering virgins! he deflowered all the girls at his old school...hell hes so fucking used up hes already been with Tanya...over and over again...PUKE...and bella is so fucking stupid she fucked that nasty dick without a condom !
HAHHAHAHA I hope she gets a untreatable std

wait WHAT? He was already a used up hoe in fucking 9th grade?/
so hes been a nasty whore for over 3 fucking YEARS?
oh my god,,,,,bella cant touch that dirty dick! its GROSS!

this Edward is just a slutty little human boy...why does he talk so big? "Ill never let anyone hurt you bella"

LOL whats a stupid 17 year old boy gonna do...its not like hes a fucking vampire

why would bella FALL APART? she barely even knows the nasty used up manwhore

half the girls at his school? so that's like what...100 girls? more?
how many virgins? 20/? we need numbers!

Edwards only 17 and hes already a used up whore...whys he so fucking gross?
and why didn't bella have anything to say about it? she didn't even THINK about asking how many chicks hes fucked! if he has or had stds! shes just like awwwww hes tortured I can fix him...
bellas fucking dumb and Edwards gross