This is good, please update

Update! This is WAY too good a story to just leave!

Are you going furtherXD?

I seriously, seriously love this so much. Everything about it is just so great and this is probably my favourite AU Beyblade story EVER. If this fandom wasn't as dead, I think you'd have so many people reading this story. XDD

The characterisations were great, everything flowed so well and oh god the humour. XDDDD You just did it so well that I want to quote all those lines back at you. I'm surprised I didn't wake up my sister from laughing so hard. I don't think I saw many spelling or grammar mistakes either, well done! :D

Oh! And in chapter 4; the beach in space... I see what you did there. eue I'm really interested in where the plot's going as well, can't wait to see more of it. :

When I got to chapter 5 I was thinking "Noooo I'll have to read it slowly now to make it last longer". I feel like going back to chapter 1 and re-reading it now. XDD Thank you very much for sharing this with us!

Pleease! U have to finish it. U.u. I couldn't stop reading this history. Luvd it. Keep it on!

ME I'M STILL READING!

FOREVER...

So I am pretty much spamming you over IM but! This story is interesting forever and I am ~intrigued~

~~intrigued~~

iyaaan okay 3

/goes to work on fairies now

I'm love this story so much. Please keep updating.

WAH!

This story is actually really cool!

I really love your writing, it's kept me hooked!

yai! a new chapter! and very good one too :) what symbolizes takao, hm...? well, i'd guess the beach in space maybe - you know, like theanime-scene when he he fought against again in g-rev? anyway, keep on going, i've got the feelin' tyson's getting somewhere with kai there... can't wait for the next chapter!

Woohoo finaly some interaction between two of them :D Cant wait for more TyKa-ness :D

so I like RAVED AND RANTED at you on aim, but. but! ;o;

Takao's super stubbornness about Kai and Rei and IS THAT PLOT I SEE and of course Boris is a douche and and and BEACH IN SPACE and pft Hitoshi yes you would punch a baby and Takao's all I AM STRONG AND MANLY hold me : and! and!

*paws at for more* f

you've some amazing writing skills... can't wait to read how this will turn out... just keep writing! :)

Ohoho new chapter:D made my day:) TyKa rulez

Really good story so far. I like the personality you've given each character. Especially Takao. Usually I can't stand him, but you make him charming and funny. I can't wait for the next chapter!

-FlamingIce

I'M AT MY GIRLFRIENDS so I can't say much, but I read it and I loved it and e, plot! *paws at* :'