Reviews for Memories of the Past
beru-senpai chapter 14 . 11/27/2014
OMG! why you do this to Gaara? He is innocent. Although I pity Sasuke because Hinata is taken away from him, but Hinata is now with Gaara. Anyway, I enjoy reading your story.
beru-senpai chapter 13 . 11/27/2014
It seems you are really desperate for reviews. I can understand that you want some feedbacks for your hardwork, but it only makes you upset when you don't get them. So, you have to change the way you are thinking. You write because you like it and want to show it to the others. Don't bother about the number of reviews. Someday, there will be people who will review your story. I hope you don't stop writing because you don't get enough review. Do what you love without thinking about other people and you will be happy.

Okay, let's talk about this chapter. I have read Courage of the Present, so I know who the mask person. I don't understand Hinata status right now. Is she a missing nin or Gaara's girlfriend or what?
beru-senpai chapter 12 . 11/27/2014
Yeah *squelling*
beru-senpai chapter 11 . 11/26/2014
Good job on potraying Naruto, but I want to see gaahina :3
beru-senpai chapter 10 . 11/26/2014
What Shukaku said is right, Gaara. Marry Hinata and have a lot of babies
beru-senpai chapter 9 . 11/26/2014
where is the "Invasion of Privacy?" I tried looking for it, but still can't find it. Anyway, this is a good chapter. Keep up the good job
beru-senpai chapter 8 . 11/26/2014
I can't intepret the dream. why it took place in konoha and gaara looked suspicious to me.
beru-senpai chapter 7 . 11/26/2014
orange hair... Juugo? but I think it's Sasuke because of the "Hyuuga-hime"
beru-senpai chapter 6 . 11/26/2014
"Hinata!" He rushed up to her and took her from Temari. He began to walk down the steps, Temari and Kankuro behind them.

The fan mistress was angry. "GAARA! What're you doing?"

"Taking her to her room. She needs to rest."

"You could at least tell us what you're doing at first, and then do it."

Gaara said nothing.

That really make me laugh.

And the kiss scene looked kind of familiar and I just realized that I read the sequel of this first.
beru-senpai chapter 5 . 11/26/2014
Erm, do you need to write the strip scene because I don't think it's needed and I want to know what is happening in Konoha now.
beru-senpai chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
I don't expect this to be so cheery so soon and what happened to naruto?
beru-senpai chapter 3 . 11/26/2014
Is hinata and gaara were friends? and has shukaku been extracted (is this the right word?) or not?

oh, so far so good
beru-senpai chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
I thought that Hinata liked Naruto, but cheated with Sasuke. Now I know that it was an arranged marriage, I will take back my last statement.
beru-senpai chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I'm sad for Naruto more than Hinata. I'm still not sure where is this going, but I'm looking forward to read it.
kandita chapter 14 . 12/21/2012
U have too much going on in this story, that its difficult to really focus...1st off u should have left Sasuke dead! And, only focus on Hinata n Gaara. There's just simply too much here that it's kinda hard to focus and grasp...the whole Neji n Hiashi discussions made no sense and its just a waste for him being in Suna
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