This is so cute. I love these uncommon points of view like this too.

Please fix this typo:

em...they boy – the Fullmetal Alchemist – was in for it.

And give your beta a piece of your mind. _~

WONDERFUL! I really enjoyed this. Seeing some EdWin from Scars POV was brilliant and having Mei hug him was the whipped cream on top, in showing Scars internal change. Very nice!

That was nice to read.

So cute, hopeful, descriptive but not tedious-I loved it entirely! EdWin forever!