I love this story

Just thought you should know: you referred to Winry as a male in the line where she starts fangirling about Rush Valley.

And when it continued? I want to see it faster))

Hello! Just so you know I quoted you on my profile, I hope you dont care. (:

I really am enjoying this, please, do continue.

Hello! I absolutely adore this story so far(: I can't wait for you to start it up again! If you wouldn't care, can you PM me? I have a few questions about the story

I glanced at this fanfic out of curiosity and it sucked me right in. You're writing is clear and your plot is well thought out, not to mention interesting. Plus you've done a nice job giving life to the characters and their interactions with each other. I definitely hope you continue this at some point! I would love to see how it ends :)

See you at your Dark Night fanfic!

And this was . . . disturbing.

Wow... You always make me late doing my homework! 'Tis so good, i can't stop! Please keep writing!

Hiatus is sad... Because this is such an awesome story. But take your. Hope you find something that inspires you to start writing again, until then i shall await patiently. (TT_TT) Good Luck

(the shadow children thing was cool!)

XD

A hiatus? You take as much time as you need! It always sucks when you can't think of anything to write.

Also, it was really interesting to know how the Shadow children were created-thanks for that! :D

All updates are good updates. Except for those updates that say the story is never going to be continued. Those updates are sad, sad updates.

Yaaay! Chu would not believe how exited I was when this got updated!

I jumped around in circles for 10 minuets before actually reading it.

Good luck for the next chapter, ima looking forward to it.

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Yay! New chapter! I don't mind that it was shorter than usual, I'm fine with that-Just so long as there are more chapters! (I hope that doesn't sound demanding...)

Everyone is in character given the altered parts of the story, and I'm really interested as to what's going to happen.

Also, I love how you portray Kimblee. It's probably mult favourite one from other stories I've read. I'm also glad that you used the manga/Brotherhood version. Because that version really is badass. :D

Thanks for the new chapter!

"It isn't candy."

LOL

Also, that last sentence was . . . just . . . GREAT! And unexpected. And it doesn't even seem like Kimbley was thinking anything sexual, which is also nice!