Reviews for A lasting Love
TheKPFan chapter 4 . 7/15
Amazing story! Great job!
Drakonis Aurous chapter 4 . 3/28/2013
Great story - nice fluff. This is a great follow up from the first story in this arc.
Can't wait to read the part

Keep up the great work
- Drakonis Aurous
Guest chapter 4 . 9/3/2012
ok just finizhed the second one good lead way in to the rest of this nice job with the fluff lol

AJW1970
CupCakeConundrum chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
I don't think I could type words to describe this story if I had a dictionary in front of me. I spent the first three chapters aw'ing and gushing and the last chapter trying not to laugh. T'was an epic achievement.

On to the next installment...

*HannaH*
sushi500 chapter 4 . 1/13/2012
Another great story! I was smiling the entire time! Gonna start to Broken Promise. I'm super excited. Thanks for writing!
Tetsuhara chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
Another really good story, but wince-inducing knowing that this is the lead up to the big crash. It's like being on the roller coaster as it starts the first great climb. You know the big drop off is coming, but even with that foreknowledge you can't help but feel a bit sick to your stomach in anticipation.

Good stuff and thanks for the story.
nekoken chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
Well finished another of your stories, I am rather surprised you only have 19 now 20 reviews. It was a great story though not a lot of action in it. though the romance was great. Yeah Ron finally got some lol well keep up the good work
Shrike176 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Nice chapter, always fun to see the happy (if stereotypical) end to prom night. Most authors seem intent on giving Kim and Ron a G rated relationship for as long as possible. I've always found that attitude odd. It's one thing to portray Kim and Ron as mature, but with some stories you'd think they were in their thirties. :)

All in all, a good story, made me sad to think of what's coming for the couple in this universe though. :(

Look forward to the next installment in this series!
captainkodak1 chapter 4 . 5/12/2009
Great little story here. Thanks of the cameo. Looking forward to what's next.
waveform chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
A prom night to remember; one without giant cybetronic robots destroying everything in sight, and one without betrayals.

Nicely done, sir! Very nicely done, indeed.
CajunBear73 chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
Nice little prom and after prom. Some connections made amongst so many.

CB73
KP's Man chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
As always a great,well written story!I can't wait for the next one.
Classic Cowboy chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
Good finish, thought I'd have made Mr Dr P make Ron sweat a little bit. Still awefully wierd a fic from you without any danger, violence, or mayhem ...
screaming phoenix chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
I read this wonderful story. Then remember the tale that introduced it. And I shudder to think what will happen to these two in the meantime. It’s like watching two trains heading toward each other at top speed and helpless to stop it or turn away.
daccu65 chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
Sentinel, you're being cruel.

Sure, you're writing a great story, but you're being cruel all the same.

Why I'm saying this is that you're showing our hero's as putting together a wonderful foundation, expressing their love and devotion, after letting us know that it's all going to come crashing to pieces. That said, it's a great piece of 'get ready for the angst' work, because we know that you're going to drop poor Ron down to the depths of despair. I like a good angst/redeption tale, so I'm looking forward to the next story.

daccu65.
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