Lovely fluff.

it was a very cute story

Absolutely brilliant.

Very cute story.

cutest thing ever :)

I loved it so much! I'm normally not one for stories like this, but this one might have changed me. I still am scared of thunderstorms and stories like this one make me feel like I'm not alone. This is definitely a favorite story of mine. Good work!

-Maxine

Oh my gosh, this is one of the sweetest things i've ever read, it was completely gorgeous! :)

I love this fic. It's so funny and cute. I love how Scott really takes on the role of big brother and how he always looks out for the others.

Great stuff!

LM

aw so cute!

this was really cute, i enjoyed it. look forward to reading more.

peace

Mel Storm

Aww! That was adorable! I love how you managed to convey just how close they were, even in sleep when they unconsciously snuggled up to each other. Then the end with Grandma dodging the boys and Kyrano was great. Nice piece of fluff. :)

The links to the pics you drew aren't all there though since FFN doesn't allow links. Try being stealth and writing DOTcom instead of .com 'cause I want to see the awesomeness! :D

!Potterwatch

hahaha, that was brill 'grandma, delete it!' so funny

and i was almost crying at the cutenes of them all falling asleep. i love 'big brother' scott so much and you write him really well.

great work! keep it up.

blacky

That was VERY sweet! I loved the brotherly interaction. And I liked the taking of the photograph at the end; rounded it off well.

OMG so sweet!1 i want one! (well i dont but still) CUTE!

thanks for the hug wop no ore business

missin you already x

*sque!*

Fluff! Glorious, shamefully sugary-sweet fluff that's made me go 'bleugh' (that being the verbal translation of me turning into a pile of goo). And it fits so well with the pictures, too! *sighs happily* You rule. *snorts* So does Grandma.

One itty-bitty pickyoon that I have to bring up:

When writing speech, you put:

“Don’t be scared Allie, it’s going away now.” He said earnestly.

- The 'He' should be 'he' with small 'h' there.

You need to apply that rule whenever you write 'he said/she said/he stated/she cried/they murmured/he sighed/she groaned...' after speech - yeah, ya get the picture. But just make sure you use a lower-case letter afterwards. All the way through the fic, you used capitals, and it's such an easily avoidable error. You still like me, right?

Oh, and a very important point: you forgot the disclaimer! Your fic might get deleted if you don't add one soon!

But a great story all the same. Luv ya!

Can I have my hug now, please? *flutters eyelids*