Love this! So in character, so funny too! Very long, but worth it. Great job!

I had a stupid grin on my face throughtout the whole diner scene. Tge interaction between Harleen and J was just perfect. I enjoyed reading every word. Thank you for putting a smile on my face.

Love it!

Hehe I loved the ending! Great story and what's the betting that the guy splattered all over the pavement has something to do with the Joker being at that diner?

Wow, this is great! Smooth transitions, accurate characterization, and interesting dialogue. I loved how you pieced it all together, especially incorporating all the different ideas into one story. Keep writing! :)

THAT'S AWESOME! I liked it a whole lot. Funny. Are you considering continuing this? because that would be even awesomer. Cliff hangers deserve sequels! :D

I love this story so much. Everytime I read it I get a big smile on my face. The characters were absolutely perfect and you had me hooked since the line.

This story idea is from Batman Confidential (just thought I'd tell you since you said you couldn't remember). I recognized it immediately.

I LOVED this one!

Absolutely incredible job. You blended the Nolanverse and the DCAU effortlessly to get a great version of both characters. Btw, have you ever read "Joker" by Brian Azzarello? The outfit you describe for Harley at the end greatly resembles some of her ensembles in that graphic novel. :) Thought you might be interested to hear that, especially if it wasn't intentional.

Regardless, fabulous job on this one!

Ok I thought about this a lot and finally decided on a word to describe the story! It's hart-warming (lame I know, but in competition with 'cute', 'sweet' and 'adorable' what do you expect...)But anyway, your angle of character exploration and portrayal fits in more with the tone of The Dark Knight more than the classical DC universe. And because of that, I just love the way you waved in a Harlequin so naturally! So this is where my genius-one-word-description comes in! It's 'cause of the relaxed feeling of comfort between the two- the unpretentious way in which they clicked together so perfectly. Also, my favorite part, you didn't rely on elaborate, overly-analytical fashion of depiction in which the Joker's character is often chained in. And Harley too- you took her for what she could be if she was an actual person (because I think it's really funny when people try to fit a flat, one-tracked 2D personality into a fiction that tries to dissect the J/H relationship in a way that suggests a deeper, more realistic meaning to it)

Agh I have stop while I can! I haven't written a review like this for so long (which is to say I haven't read anything worth it in "so long") and I just love reading/reviewing/criticizing good stories! But seriously what I really mean is that I heart-felt your heart-warming story XP

A great story. Very good.

DUDDE!

I LOVEDD this! It was Greatt!

Ah!

haha!

You have to make a sequel or something?

I wana know what the Joker SAYSS! haha

Wow, Im impatient! haha!

Keep on Keepin on!:)

I can't believe this hasn't been reviewed yet! I absolutely love it. Had me laughing out loud at more than a couple parts...love that you incorporate the cheese grater and stapler. Loved it all.

Except...Rick calling Harley a slut in that one line...thought it was already implied in his attitude...making that bit of dialogue a bit cheesey.

Otherwise, perfect!