This was so hot, yet sweet and romantic at the same time. I wish this was the actual plot for Sailor Moon, since I ended up hating the show entirely.

Severely out of character for both girls. This didn't read like Usagi and Rei as much as it did two fan characters.
Of course Usagi is naive. It's Usagi, not some some Victorian s and m baroness lol.
And your Rei is a very tame impersonator. In no situation would Rei ever behave like the prued, emotional nun I read here.
Sorry, but this seems like a story about other people with the Senshi's names tacked on.
Not at all what I was looking for.

wow, I am very impressed. Usually it is either extremely erotic, or extremely romantic, but this one was both. I would love to hear what happens when Darren finds out. With how aroused he was watching the kiss, and with the fact that Darren and Rei dated once, a threesome relationship might be possible.

Ew nasy

That was so hot I loved it

Wow, that was so fucking hot. Continue please.

I don't think she should cheat on Chiba-san. Usagi-chan should just choose Rei and break up with Chiba-san, but stay 'friends' with him. And he should just accept that and move on. (But when Crystal Tokyo gets closer he should just get her pregnant with Chibiusa. This way she will still exist.) Rei and Usagi!

That was really hot ;P

Keep writing :)

Laterz

aw! this made me a bit sad! TT they shouldn't have to hid their love. BUT IT WAS A WONDERFUL STORY! this is one of my all time favorite couples! 33 im so glad u wrote this!

Somethings are worded strangely. Also try using spell/grammar check.

Loved the things Usagi did to get closer to Rei.

love it

thank for make me happy

Nice little story, kept it nice and simple nothing overly raunchy, I don't really like Usagi cheating on Mamo, and not chosing between the two, but I can understand the idea behind it.

Overall nice story, then again I am a huge ReiXUsagi fan.