This is such an interesting story, I've not seen anything else like it. It's a very unique concept. Will there be more to this? I would love to see how things play out.

Thank you and have a good day!
~Misty

i hope you have not given up on making more. i found this story in 2010 and i have been checking up on it :)
i like the story and i hope there is more :)

Interesting story. Almost as confusing as the butterfly effect movies but that's besides the point.

So Ichigo tries to purge his hollow, and in doing so somehow sends him into another dimension, in which he somehow ends up possessing the body of Ichigo's twin that he apparently has now...Cool.

Like I said interesting concept. Stories also well written, and everyone is in character. Well I think they're in character. It is an alternate dimension after all. But regardless! Good description, and generally quite good overall.

Unfortunately it appears you haven't updated in over two years so I suppose I'm kidding myself if I think that this review will renew your interest and get you to continue it. But it's worth a try. Oh well. I wish you would, but you probably won't, and I suppose there's nothing more I can say.

haha! love it!

COOL! Shiro is portrayed so well here! And I loved his interaction with Urahara people and Shinji! EEK! Shiro/Ichigo brotherliness without underlying incest! Hope you update soon! This is really great!

ARGH THIS IS KILLING ME! WHEN R U GOING TO UPDATE? I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! THIS IS MY FAV FANFIC EVER AND IT REALLY IS KILLING ME NOT TO SEE IT UPDATED! I even went so far as to write what might happen next because I just needed some peace of mind. Srsly, r u gonna update soon or hav u dropped this story? If u hav, please let us know! It really is killing me with anticipation. I've re-read this story about 20 times now and it never stops amazing me. It really is just a wonderful story and a wonderful idea (oh how I hate that I didn't come up with it first) Please don't leave me waiting and PLEASE UPDATE! WE NEED MORE SHIRO!

...'Tis the awesome... Brilliant story. I can't wait to see what's next, nor can I wait to see what they're gonna do about it. X3

I liked this very much. I only found it thanks to some fanart on dA, and I'm glad I did. Shiro's been through hxll since he woke up. I kinda feel bad for him.

Anyway I know how your profile says your on a hiatus from , but please update soon

Omg. That is awsome. I read ao fast it feels like my heart is gonna jump outa my cheast. That's how epic it was. Can't wait for more.

o epic

I'm only on the 2nd chapter and already I'm in love.

...I really hope you plan on finishing this story, or I'm going to hysterically cry... ;_;

You know, I think this chapter would have been stronger if we would have gotten this versions story behind Rukia meeting Shiro...but I can see why you didn't, and in a way us being as utterly clueless as the hollow makes for an interesting read. I really would like to know exactly how those two met now, although I'll bet it's similar to the real world.

Next question: If Shiro exists like he does in this world (as a twin or what not), and Zangetsu as well, and Ichigo doesn't have his monstrous spiritual pressure, why isn't it the same with the other Visored?

Hmm. Well, I have to say I love the concept. I like the idea and the pacing, as well as the starting point. My biggest problem is the vocabulary. The repetitive harsh language really detracts from the story, in my opinion.

You know, I just noticed this after re-reading, but this Ichigo has amber eyes too, and not the brown of the canon Ichigo? Huh.

For some reason, I'd love to see the two Ichigos face off.

Love it! I don't think I've seen anyone give Hollow Ichigo a body before. AUs where he's his own person, or instances where he has control of Ichigo's, yes... but not one where he's a hollow in someone else's body.

I hope you reveal what happened soon... I'm really curious to know how Rukia knows Shiro. O_o